[Loveless] [Seimei, Ritsuka, Soubi] Scripture

Jul 14, 2007 23:57

Title: Scripture
Author/ess: kyouten (also Ouvalyrin at ff.net)
Series: Loveless
Length: 954 words, one shot
Character/pairing: Seimei, Ritsuka, Soubi (though the author labels it as Seimei/Ritsuka)
Rating/warnings: K+/PG, pre-series, spoilers for that big Seimei spoiler after volume 5 or so
Summary: Don’t touch, don’t hurt, don’t break. The only thing you can do is look-but it would be so easy to just…

Uhm, I suppose I should start with the fact that this fic was actually labeled Seimei/Ritsuka. I’m incredibly dense but I do have a nose for pairings, and…yeah, I didn’t get the pairing vibe at all. Actually, that’s been my reaction to most Seimei/Ritsuka fic I’ve found: “…wait, it’s supposed to be incest?” So if you read it and think otherwise, it’s probably just my interpretation. But in the meantime. Seimei, on Ritsuka, Soubi, and the fragility of many things.

There’s just something about the writing. The imagery and symbolism works, and isn’t too overbearing. Bonus points. And the imagery itself lingers and is pretty strong. The characterization is also solid. There’s variety with Ritsuka, there’s various sides of Soubi, and Seimei, as usual, is in a class all on his own, and the author completely grabs that. So definitely give this a go - I thought it captured the intricacies of their interactions in a nicely done way.

Preview:
Ritsuka is young still. He’s popular and friendly and outgoing, a smile ever-present on his small face. Seimei can trace the path of his smile at night with his eyes closed, fantasizes about being Ritsuka’s world (let me become the only one who matters, the only one you need).

Soubi’s signature is a swarm of butterflies. The other day Ritsuka chased them in the park, almost caught one before it escaped. Seimei had said that if he touched them they’d never fly again and Ritsuka stopped-

and didn’t it feel so GOOD knowing that here was something beautiful and precious and weak and here you were able to crush it in one hand without a second thought make it yoursapartofyou for forever if you wanted and

didn’t you just LOVE that feeling?

seimei, soubi, loveless, kyouten, ritsuka, oneshot

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