Sadie, Sadie - you are literally killing me. This is heartbreaking. The symetry between love and hate, coming and leaving, breaking and mending...it's perfection. This is wonderful, heartbreaking but beautiful. I'll go cry now.
Dude, I know! I knew there was going to be an execution when I started writing, but I had no idea I'd kill off Keith. I love him! That's what made me all sad.
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This is heartbreaking. The symetry between love and hate, coming and leaving, breaking and mending...it's perfection.
This is wonderful, heartbreaking but beautiful.
I'll go cry now.
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I don't even know what to say, that was so like, beauiful.
Awesome job. Really awesome.
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*passes you a kleenex*
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This is just brilliant...I liked the symmetry created between Veronica and Logan with both their fathers dying.
“I hate him so much, but he’s my father. He’s my father,” Logan chokes out.
And that line just broke me! I need some fluff!
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This is excellent, dude.
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Aww, thanks!
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