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Fic: In The End (Veronica, Logan) NC-17

Jan 18, 2007 18:11

Title: In The End
Author: fickledame
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 6033
Characters: Veronica, Logan. (The POV shifts, and I hope it doesn’t confuse anyone. I think it should be quite clear whose point of view it is.)
Summary: “Everyone loved Lilly and just put up with you, and that killed you, didn’t it?” Lamb finds a new suspect to pin Lilly’ ( Read more... )

veronica, logan, fickledame

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fickledame January 18 2007, 19:03:08 UTC

Aw, thank you! I was shit-scared of posting this fic, so thanks so much for the quick feedback! That's really lovely of you to say. :)

shiny4love January 18 2007, 18:45:40 UTC

Whoa that was intense.

Damn good, to be honest i am lost for words.

Superb.

fickledame January 18 2007, 19:03:35 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, if that's the right word. :P

exposed1 January 18 2007, 19:29:36 UTC

Angst-athon! I loved the beginning of this piece. The way that everyone just believed that Veronica would do something. How her transformation slowly took place. The shit she went through from the 09ers. Really wonderful job sweetie!

PS you should write more angst! I wub the angst!

fickledame January 18 2007, 23:05:01 UTC

Hee, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

PS. I get told off for writing angst normally!

exposed1 January 18 2007, 23:10:25 UTC

Never will you get told off for writing angst from me. I hate to love it. lol There's something so raw about when you break a character. Things and nuances that you didn't realize before until you write/read it.

insunshine January 18 2007, 20:11:40 UTC

This was really insane, but in a good way.

I totally wouldn't have expected any of it, and it's really rare to find a fic so completely original.

fickledame January 18 2007, 23:05:35 UTC

Aw, thank you! That's really lovely to hear. Thanks so much for reading.

havemy_heart January 18 2007, 21:18:36 UTC

I hope every last one of them feels like complete and total shit. They raped her on purpose! I can't and don't feel sorry for any of them, not even Logan. He should have known she could never do anything like that. I was hoping that they'd find out she didn't do it, so they could carry around that guilt for the rest of their lives, so thank you for that small concession. As much as I love Logan in the "real" world, in this world, I hope he chokes to death on his guilt. I'm going to pretend that Veronica haunts his ass for the rest of his life!

Strangely, this didn't even make me cry, and you know what a big deal that is. I think it's because I was pretty sure of what was going to happen and I was so pissed at everyone. Being angry overrules being sad.

fickledame January 18 2007, 23:08:00 UTC

Hee, you rock. I actually said to one of my friends I was scared you'd get a lynch mob out against me after this. ;) Veronica would totally haunt him with Lilly. I hated Logan in this too. It's hard for me to hate him, but yeah.

Thanks so much for reading!