WOW....................... I love this new developement. Esperanza has a sense of mystery around her(who is the mother) that I am just dying to figure it out!!! I've gotta hand it to ya, you have stopped me in my tracks and thats a hard thing to do. I figured out all of the VM mysteries thus far in the first 2 or so episodes. In the MOTW in the type of clue that you get. Even 4 the season3 one.............
OK, so here's what I was thinking at first. In the beginning I thought that Logan and Weevil had become friends over the years, then Weevil died and something happened to the true mother so Logan took her. I know, crazy right? But after starting to think of mysteries like VM does, wildest scenario always pops up first. Then I took it down a notch. I figured that the mom is probably related to Weevil in some way but then Letty just had to go and address Logan as Mr.Echolls and I started to doubt all of those ideas. As of now........... I am fresh out of scenarios. They are either to plain or to out there!! lol. But then I was like maybe its not a Mexican person, maybe it was Jackie!!! lol. Then I stopped.
As for Nick......... he seems great. Just enough to keep V busy but not enough to keep her away from Logan*evil smiles* I like how you stayed away from the V has a bad boyfriend and ofcourse Logan will get her. Here, there is some kind of competition. I love it in fics but on the show.............. with Rob Thomas' mind. I dont think so!!! I like Nick, hope 2 see more of him.
All in all, forever and always will I love this story!!! Its really different from many others since not too many have tapped into the detail of Duncan and Veronica actually being related and its always interesting to see that play out. As always........... good luck and ofcourse I loved this update!! Hope 2 see more soon.
Wow. Just, wow. Thanks so much for your detailed feedback/spec. I don't know if I've ever had anyone spec on one of my fanfics before. Whee! It just gives me this warm rush of happiness, which - believe me - was more than welcome with the crazy week I've just had.
The truth about Esperanza's maternity isn't all that obvious, although there have been a few general clues at least sprinked throughout the first few chapters. Regardless, I'm not going to confirm or deny anything, except to say that Jackie doesn't exist in this world as she wasn't introduced until well after this fic diverges from canon. I mean, that's not to say that she and Logan couldn't have run into each other in LA or whatever, but it's not like he knew her from high school or anything. Just ... for the record. :)
And I'm glad that you (and others) have been enjoying Nick. And, honestly, Logan and Veronica are both at points in their lives (the details of which, for Logan, will be divulged in the coming chapters) where they don't necessarily want to be together anymore. I mean, they still care for each other (obviously), but they're at such different points in their life that a relationship between them doesn't make much sense.
Not that these things aren't adaptable (after all, I've made no secret of the fact that this story will be L/V ... eventually), but right now, it's not like Nick is even "standing between them being together." Hooking up or dating or ... whatever with the other isn't something that has been on their minds as of late.
As for the show, I"m okay with them not being together (and even with other people!), so long as it's CLEAR that it was miscommunication or something that broke them up and so long that JD and KB make it clear from their kickass acting abilities that they still love one another. They just think that the sentiment isn't reciprocated. :)
Anyhow, now that I've left you a reeeeeally long response, I think I should just finish up and head off to class. I'm really happy to hear that you're enjoying this fic, so thanks again for the awesome feedback! :)
Your more than welcome and I love that you loved my review. I didnt know if I had said everything very clearly so I was worried I would come across as if I didnt like your story when I absolutely love it!! I understand your view on the show, I just want them to stay together you know?! Hints about the mother............ I must look back and think like Veronica. Hey, it sometimes helps................. anyway ttyl hope to hear more soon!!! If not already I havent really looked around yet!! lol.
Dude, seriously, I kept the email that had your review enclosed in my inbox for the past week, as I was studying like crazy-mad for a huge test I had earlier this week. I just kept rereading it when I'd get frustrated or tired or whatever. Yeah, this fic has minimal relevance to the world of pharmacy and pharmacy therapy.
But, yeah, seriously, your feedback really meant a lot to me. :) [and I posted Chapter 4 this morning, yay! :)]
Hey, I think its great that you loved it that much!!! We should totally become like VM buddies!!! Wait around for my comment on your next chapter!! I hope it lives to this ones reputation lol. Here I go......
OK, so here's what I was thinking at first. In the beginning I thought that Logan and Weevil had become friends over the years, then Weevil died and something happened to the true mother so Logan took her. I know, crazy right? But after starting to think of mysteries like VM does, wildest scenario always pops up first. Then I took it down a notch. I figured that the mom is probably related to Weevil in some way but then Letty just had to go and address Logan as Mr.Echolls and I started to doubt all of those ideas. As of now........... I am fresh out of scenarios. They are either to plain or to out there!! lol. But then I was like maybe its not a Mexican person, maybe it was Jackie!!! lol. Then I stopped.
As for Nick......... he seems great. Just enough to keep V busy but not enough to keep her away from Logan*evil smiles* I like how you stayed away from the V has a bad boyfriend and ofcourse Logan will get her. Here, there is some kind of competition. I love it in fics but on the show.............. with Rob Thomas' mind. I dont think so!!! I like Nick, hope 2 see more of him.
All in all, forever and always will I love this story!!! Its really different from many others since not too many have tapped into the detail of Duncan and Veronica actually being related and its always interesting to see that play out. As always........... good luck and ofcourse I loved this update!! Hope 2 see more soon.
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The truth about Esperanza's maternity isn't all that obvious, although there have been a few general clues at least sprinked throughout the first few chapters. Regardless, I'm not going to confirm or deny anything, except to say that Jackie doesn't exist in this world as she wasn't introduced until well after this fic diverges from canon. I mean, that's not to say that she and Logan couldn't have run into each other in LA or whatever, but it's not like he knew her from high school or anything. Just ... for the record. :)
And I'm glad that you (and others) have been enjoying Nick. And, honestly, Logan and Veronica are both at points in their lives (the details of which, for Logan, will be divulged in the coming chapters) where they don't necessarily want to be together anymore. I mean, they still care for each other (obviously), but they're at such different points in their life that a relationship between them doesn't make much sense.
Not that these things aren't adaptable (after all, I've made no secret of the fact that this story will be L/V ... eventually), but right now, it's not like Nick is even "standing between them being together." Hooking up or dating or ... whatever with the other isn't something that has been on their minds as of late.
As for the show, I"m okay with them not being together (and even with other people!), so long as it's CLEAR that it was miscommunication or something that broke them up and so long that JD and KB make it clear from their kickass acting abilities that they still love one another. They just think that the sentiment isn't reciprocated. :)
Anyhow, now that I've left you a reeeeeally long response, I think I should just finish up and head off to class. I'm really happy to hear that you're enjoying this fic, so thanks again for the awesome feedback! :)
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But, yeah, seriously, your feedback really meant a lot to me. :) [and I posted Chapter 4 this morning, yay! :)]
Thanks again!
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