Comments | fic_flail: Common People - Being Human

toestastegood in fic_flail

Common People - Being Human - George/Mitchell

May 22, 2009 17:30

Title: Common People
Pairing: George/Mitchell
Word Count: 882
Rating: PG
A/N: Written for phantomreviewer for the ABC meme, 'temptation'. Pre-series.
Summary: After meeting George for the first time, Mitchell visits him again.

( Common People )

challenge:abc meme, fandom:being human, character:george sands, pairing:george/mitchell, character:john mitchell

Comments 17

trobadora May 22 2009, 16:59:04 UTC

This is lovely!

dancinguniverse May 22 2009, 18:12:24 UTC

aww. This was lovely. They're so comfortable with one another.

stealth_rose May 22 2009, 19:15:58 UTC

Very nice and very in voice. :) Thank you for writing this!

vanishing_cake May 22 2009, 23:07:10 UTC

This was paced just right, it didn't feel too fast or too wrong, and you got the characters' voices about down. I'm not sure about the pleasantly startled in the second scene for George; that's the only thing I couldn't picture the way you described, because he is kind of a snarky, spastic personality. Other than that, though, it was perfect.

Now I'm singing the Pulp song they used in the pilot in my head, and can't stop. Thanks.

alba17 May 23 2009, 01:34:10 UTC

Awww, very nice. Nice sequence of little scenes and George taking care of him at the end. Sweet.