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So Close (But Not Enough) - Merlin - Arthur/Merlin

Mar 28, 2009 00:53

Title: So Close (But Not Enough)
Pairing: pre-Arthur/Merlin
Word Count: 547
Rating: PG
A/N: Written for comment_fic.
Summary: Arthur nearly kisses Merlin before a tournament (and subsequently vows to seek vengeance on all trumpeters in the kingdom).

( So Close (But Not Enough) )

character:merlin, pairing:arthur/merlin, character:arthur pendragon, fandom:merlin, challenge:comment_fic

Comments 29

rane_ab March 28 2009, 01:03:48 UTC

Ngh - that was unexpectedly hot, given that nothing actually happened. Love the last paragraph, too: it's so very, very Arthur, and I can just see his gestures in my mind's eye.

laurapetri March 28 2009, 01:26:59 UTC

The first almost kiss is always a sensual delight

sagarian March 28 2009, 02:19:58 UTC

Merlin does have some luscious-looking lips, doesn't he? All pouty and plump.

Ooh, such an intimate moment you have them sharing here. I love how Arthur hopes he is about to taste virgin lips.

Damn that inconveniently-timed trumpeting!

Thanks for the delightful read :)

yellowvalley March 28 2009, 02:38:34 UTC

This is so much hotter than three fourths of the explicit full-on type stuff out there. Wow.

blue_meridian March 28 2009, 02:57:53 UTC

I know my feedback is in danger of becoming monotonous but-

*FLAILS, LOVES*

*g*