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Endless Temptation - Being Human - George/Mitchell

Jan 28, 2009 18:02

Title: Endless Temptation
Pairing: George/Mitchell
Word Count: 438
Rating: R
Spoilers: 1x01
A/N: Written for the porn battle.
Summary: "Do I smell funny?"

( Endless Temptation )

fandom:being human, character:george sands, challenge:porn battle, pairing:george/mitchell, character:john mitchell

Comments 8

markenzeichen January 28 2009, 18:42:41 UTC

:3
You've got George's panicked voice down perfectly.
And of course, poor Mitchell - you captured the struggle with the vampiric side of himself against his feelings for George really nicely, here.
Awesome work! :)

kathkin January 28 2009, 18:56:37 UTC

I don't really ship it, but... you've got them both so perfectly. : D

jeza_red January 28 2009, 19:29:42 UTC

Aw, George why such low esteem? XD Licking a dog, man, that's richXD

Pretty little gem this story is. New Mitchells is nervous and nagsty, but not too much^^ Great story!

szm January 28 2009, 19:49:55 UTC

I ca see George obsessing over that once everything else had died down. And poor Mitchell, having to pull himself back again. Lovely story.

filthgoblin February 2 2009, 18:24:25 UTC

One of the things that I'm loving about Mitchell in this incarnation is how brooding, how dark, how predatory he is. And the last line is just killer. Yum.