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Something Like Seduction - Heroes - Mohinder/Sylar

Jan 01, 2008 21:02

Title: Something Like Seduction
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Word Count: 3829
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Dub-con
A/N: Something fairly silly written to cheer up my winter-blues. I used the 25fluffyfics 'Flowers' and the 25_streetsigns 'Yield' prompt. The poem quoted is Valediction: Forbidding Mourning by John Donne.
Summary: "He's never tried to court someone before, but he's ( Read more... )

pairing:mohinder/sylar, prompt:25_streetsigns, fandom:heroes, character:sylar, character:mohinder suresh, prompt:25fluffyfics

Comments 31

kael_raye January 1 2008, 21:27:12 UTC

Ooooo!!! XD I'm laughing and gleeful and this was just precious! Very nicely done! They were both so in character and I am amazed. Never thought a story like this would ever be written and you did it so well. Thank you!

shimmeree January 3 2008, 04:07:07 UTC

Your icon makes me lol.

kael_raye January 3 2008, 04:13:18 UTC

*snerk* Isn't it just awesome and true? XD

mabetini made it and I couldn't resist stealing it.

ladywilde80 January 1 2008, 21:43:09 UTC

Oh wow. This was a great story. Imagine Sylar wooing Mohinder like that only for it to end with THAT.

Nice. I enjoyed this.

poemwithnorhyme January 1 2008, 21:55:33 UTC

I love the beginning of this, it gives Sylar such a human side, and I can relate somehow, though I haven't even kissed anyone romantically yet..*is social outcast* XD

Mohinder seems like someone that will enjoy pretty things, being an extremely pretty thing himself. <---*giggles* Pretty thing...

Sylar as James Bond..lol

No - more gifts are required. <--LOL! Such a simple answer to his complex problem!

I love that he's still going after special people while he's doing this, just brings another level of humor (to me) in this that's just great.

Yep, poetry doesn't always work, people who think it does are idiots...Sorry, had to rant for a bit there. XD

Mohinder getting jewelry and the 'ungrateful brat' part just made me burst out in laughter. I loved this to death! It was just so cute and like kael_raye said, they're amazingly in character! This was fluffy but yet serious, just brilliant! I love you! ^_^

starrdust411 January 1 2008, 22:10:40 UTC

ROFL. This was so cute. lol. I like the idea of Sylar showering Mohinder with gifts, especially since it worked... sort of XD

greyelveneyes January 1 2008, 22:13:30 UTC

A bouquet of flowers isn't enough to make up for the murder of a father.

That...is the understatement of the millennium, Sylar. (And SO damn funny.)

In a comic book, the confusion of Mohinder's expression could have been covered with a simple "…" in the speech bubble.

There is so much LOL, that I got strange looks from my family. XD

+mem, +mem, +mem. Srsly.

This was probably one of the best things I've ever read for the (non-crack!) humorous take of a rather morbid situation--Sylar stalking Mohinder will always be a tad on the creepy side, no matter how much we fangirls may like it.