Forward - Heroes - Mohinder/Adam; Mohinder/Sylar

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Title: Forward
Pairing: Mohinder/Adam; Mohinder/Sylar
Word Count: 5895
Rating: R
Warning: Character death
A/N: Written for a_to_z_prompts “far-fetched” (referring to the fake-science!). Contains minor, warped spoilers for S3.
Summary: “Every day at this place he takes step after step into a morally grey world. Ethics are blurred here, strange and different.”

Comments

[widestance75]

I enjoyed this as I was reading it, I loved it even more with that ending! Adam and Mohinder teaming up! Ack! Love it!

I loved Adam, and how he was watching Mohinder and looking for a way to manipulate him. Adam watches him as he approaches, warily. "You're not sure about doing this, are you Professor?" I really liked how you conveyed this feeling - as if Adam were dying - after he was injected. Because, he really is now dying.

And I really loved how seductive Adam was, it had me on the edge of my seat. "You come into this place every day, inviting someone to come along and corrupt you," Adam murmurs. OMG that's brilliant!

I really liked Mohinder's reaction to Sylar's death. Aimless - it's something he's certain is not a good state for any scientist to find himself in - but he has discovered a cure and he has avenged his father's death. There's nothing left for him now. And then how Adam takes advantage of that aimlessness to get him to work with him.

Really a cool concept and really well done.

Love!

[levitatethis]

Apparently I am in love with the idea of Mohinder and Adam working together. I know I want them to cross paths on the show, but this exceeds my imaginings

[bonniesrg]

Do you know how sad it makes me that Momo didn't even care that Sylar died:P I really just want Adam to betray him so Momo can feel like an idiot again.

Adam is master manipulator, knows just what buttons to push.

[kalikahuntress]

I feel really sad for Mohinder in this. Now that Sylar's dead he can't even bring himself to do what his original mission was, to actually help people. One can hope that Mohinder will one day do things his own way instead of being led by others. I find this scenario totally plausible even though I wouldn't want it to happen on the show, I'd like to think by this point Mohinder would actually make a positive difference with his intellect and motivation.

[spinawebofsound]

You wrote Adam/Mohinder this makes me so very happy as I would love to see them interact with each other on the show. Oh this made me sad Sylar pleading to keep his powers, poor Mohinder gaining nothing from his death. Completely love the idea of Adam and Mohinder changing things for hopefully the better.