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In Reverse - Heroes - Mohinder/Monica

Jul 31, 2008 22:43

Title: In Reverse
Pairing: Mohinder/Monica
Word Count: 504
Rating: R
A/N: Written for the porn battle. Also using for a_to_z_prompts 'deep rooted'. Set in the 'Five Years Gone' universe.
Summary: "He watches her as she slips from underneath the bright white covers. She's glorious when naked, every inch of her skin demanding attention."

( In Reverse )

challenge:porn battle, pairing:mohinder/monica, fandom:heroes, prompt:a_to_z_prompts, character:monica dawson, character:mohinder suresh

Comments 7

perdiccas July 31 2008, 23:59:21 UTC

First I just love you for writing this pairing because they are the best!

The description of Monica dressing was just perfection, so sensual. And I loved the 'St. Joan' at the end. I want this future to be canon!

leoprincess August 1 2008, 00:10:41 UTC

Wow. There is a God. Just last night I was whining to myself about needing more Monica/Mohinder and the Universe delivered with fine style! XD

Thanks for portraying Mohinder as a mortal man with hormones. If you took the series as gospel, you'd think the man got his sexual kicks from research. That said, I'd gladly offer up one of my enemies in order to see this brought to life on screen.

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leoprincess August 22 2008, 02:34:17 UTC

I've lost count on how many times I've read this one fic.

happywriter06 August 1 2008, 16:04:27 UTC

I love this pairing. I especially love the beginning. It really pulls you in.

mystery_sock August 10 2008, 18:16:12 UTC

First fic I've read with this pairing; and now I totally want some more. Nicely done!

msloserrific August 30 2008, 18:34:18 UTC

OMG. I haven't read Monica fic in SO long. I loved it!