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Frozen on the Air - Lost - Miles/Daniel

Jul 21, 2008 19:28

Title: Frozen on the Air
Pairing: Miles/Daniel
Word Count: 1050
Rating: light R
Warning: implied character death
A/N: Queen astra2104 requested 'ice' as her theme.
Summary: "The island moves and the ocean freezes."

( Frozen on the Air )

luau 2008, character:daniel faraday, pairing:daniel/miles, fandom:lost, character:miles straume

Comments 14

astra2104 July 21 2008, 21:34:16 UTC

The island freezes over? To quote Miles, What the fuck?

This is an awesome idea, and such an original way to use the prompt! I love the images this creates in my mind - I think after all these years of beach and sun I'm just fed up enough with it to appreciate the thought of them being trapped in a world of snow and ice :)

Thank you so much for this!

janie_tangerine July 21 2008, 21:50:09 UTC

Ha, finally some Daniel/Miles! I don't think I've ever read one (which is strange because at least at the beginning I thought they'd have been cute) and this was great. You have Miles completely spot on. Also, genial idea. Icy as soon as they move? Now that'd work.

Sawyer barks orders and that just makes it so much worse. Who put him in charge anyway? What idiot thought that was a good idea?

LOL. I love how he resents Sawyer and how he gets back at him with Daniel the way Sawyer got back at him with Claire. I really liked how you dealt with Charlotte here and with Miles' sort of feelings. The ending was just lovely, I kind of melted there. I love hand-holding, I so do. ♥ I really liked it!

elliotsmelliot July 22 2008, 04:16:47 UTC

I really enjoyed this. I didn't realize until I read this what a longing I've had for Miles. I loved his blunt take on things and threats toward Sawyer. Meanwhile wiggly Daniel seems oblivious to the entire affair, poor boy.

dustyirish2003 July 23 2008, 00:17:27 UTC

Wow! I'm finally back, after my damned computer went on the blink for two days, and imagine my squeeage when the first thing I see when I get on here is a fic from you (always enough to cheer me in its own right) ... a fic with Dan/Miles!!! If I didn't love you already, I'd sure love you now ( ... )

siluria July 23 2008, 20:33:30 UTC

Great idea to see the cold of the orchid spread out to the surface. I also like the relationship you have developing between Daniel and Miles, and the way you wrote it.