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Circles in the Water - Lost - Jin/Sawyer

Jul 10, 2008 19:01

Title: Circles in the Water
Pairing: Jin/Sawyer
Word Count: 500
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Through S4
A/N: Queen eponine119 requested unusual pairings - I tried to come up with some Jack/Shannon but instead I… uh… ended up here: five one hundred word drabbles with Jin and Sawyer.
Summary: How're you gonna tell him about Sun?

( Circles in the Water )

character:sawyer, luau 2008, character:jin-soo kwon, pairing:jin/sawyer, fandom:lost

Comments 13

janie_tangerine July 10 2008, 18:48:23 UTC

This was so very delightful! I really, really liked it. They do make some very kind of sense and how it is that you make crack pairings so really cute. Your Sawyer voice was spot on, I could totally see Jin kissing him first and being quite not talkative.

"Chewie," he calls, "you nearly done?"

Jin holds up his hand and offers a rare smile so Sawyer has to nod. "Soon," Jin says, "Han."

That's enough to make his grumpy mood disappear: he never would've pegged Jin for a Star Wars fan.

This TOTALLY owned. I loved that exchange, I could so see it! And the not-hug made me sniff. Lovely!

haldoor July 10 2008, 22:28:30 UTC

OOh, I like - tbh, I've always had a secret thing about this pairing, though I've never attempted it myself! Love the SF nicknames too - perfect! ;-)

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haldoor July 12 2008, 07:56:01 UTC

I have had thoughts of giving it a go, but haven't quite had the exact bunny I needed! Thanks in advance - if I ever do write it, I'll let you know! ;-)

demonqueen666 July 11 2008, 00:01:31 UTC

I love Jin calling him "Han". Cuestest thing ever.

I also love Sawyer describing Jin as an avenging angel when he sleeps.

An odd pairing to be sure, but you really made it work. Good for you!

eponine119 July 11 2008, 00:57:23 UTC

This is great! Very unusual, and very well done. I love this line:

The years slip past (sand through split fingers) and Jin talks a little more; Sawyer watches him a little less (though eyes still linger, and not-hugs are always available) but he always grins when Jin speaks. and the way you use parentheticals to kind of keep things unfolding, through to the end. Lovely job.

inthekeyofd July 11 2008, 04:38:03 UTC

He called him HAN!!!!!

Even if this is an unusual pairing, you so SO made it so plausible, most excellently done!