Back on Track - Heroes - Mohinder/Audrey

[toestastegood]

Title: Back on Track
Pairing: Audrey/Mohinder
Word Count: 2902
Rating: PG
Warning: Character death
A/N: Written with 25_streetsigns 'Detour' prompt.
Summary: When Agent Hanson turns up, arms crossed over her chest, Mohinder is forced to finally start looking at the mess his life has crumbled into since Matt died.

Comments

[neshel]

Audrey!!! (I miss her, she was so awesome.)

This was such a sweet little fic (yes, I totally don't care that Matt's dead... *sigh*).

This line made me giggle: ""You're such a dork," she says, but it sounds like a compliment and he can't stop himself from grinning more."

It seems so very IC for Audrey and I dunno, I just loved it.

Also, I really liked how you portrayed the Matt/Mohinder living situation. It fit well with "reality" and cannon and Molly ending up with another family makes a lot of sense.

[trias_cube]

Great story! I like how you showed both Mohinder and Audrey struggling with the sudden death of Matt. The feelings of depression, self-neglect, etc. that you showed seemed very realistic.

[dyaniera]

Very enjoyable to read. Unexpected, but it flowed very easy and naturally. Thank you for sharing.

[shimmeree]

I've been kind of curious about this ship for a while now, and was totally happy to see a fic for them! Good job!

[ibroketuesday]

Oh, this is great! I've been wanting Mohinder/Audrey for awhile (I brought up the idea of Sylar/Audrey, and someone said, "How about Mohinder/Audrey instead?" and I was like "OOH YES!"), and this delivered. Thank you!

[indigo_baby]

can i just say that I CRACKED UP when i saw your icon. I love it. ::runs off to love Mohinder fic somewhere else::