At Gunpoint 3/10

Jun 26, 2010 00:13

Title: At Gunpoint 3/10
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key
Genre: AU
Rating: PG for this chapter
Summary: Jonghyun's mind can't stop racing and the sun won't stop glaring into his eyes, when he almost runs over some kid with his bike.
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!chaptered, f: shinee, p: jonghyun/key

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tsunagatte June 25 2010, 21:50:49 UTC
Ahh~ I'm really looking forward to where this goes from here!

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x_saru_x June 26 2010, 11:09:19 UTC
Glad to hear!
Thanks for reading :]

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x_saru_x June 26 2010, 11:12:35 UTC
Yeah, I admit you need some patience to read this one lol. And Onew's profile shall remain mysterious for now, dundundundunnn~

You think so? I really would, but I've arranged my schedule so that I will definitely have access to the internet no matter where I go for vacation :/

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x_saru_x June 26 2010, 14:57:10 UTC
I've been thinking about that, yeah, but it's just that I'm trying to make everything fit. I'm still okay, but based on the vacation plans my parents have made, I won't have access to the internet every now and then for some days. So, basically, I tried half adjusting my summer to the fic and half adjusting the fic to my summer, lol.

I'll try and see if I could work some other schedule out, although I'm not promising anything ♥

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x_saru_x June 26 2010, 11:13:07 UTC
Good to hear! :3
Thanks for reading ♥

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lovebyelove June 26 2010, 06:17:08 UTC
I knew that was Jonghyun on the bike! But I just didn't want to think/analyze it too much.

You are doing fine actually more than fine. You are doing way beyond EXCELLENT! You have such an imagination and with details, I love it! :) I could just imagine myself in this story!

Minhooo! Why so serious huh! XD I hope all SHINee members are in here and somehow partake in this adventurous story!

They finally met! It's quite small but I just felt the tension or more like Jjong's shock at seeing Key/Kibum. I hope the next chapter they get to talk more or IDK. I'm just glad you updated!

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x_saru_x June 26 2010, 11:16:43 UTC
Aw, honestly? Not gonna lie, I've been having some second thoughts on it, sadly, but hearing all this is relieving, really. Thank you ♥

Minho always is srs bzns u_u

And yes, they very much did! Jonghyun's good at hiding, but he definitely was shaken, I'll have to say. Well, you'll have to wait and see! :3

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lovebyelove June 26 2010, 19:20:34 UTC
Aww I think you are doing a wonderful job! And, second thoughts? About what? I find this fic to be awesome and its such a fun story to read! You have no worries because this fic is well-crafted and just amazing. You might think otherwise so but I like it.

For sure, I can't write like this! ♥

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x_saru_x June 26 2010, 19:57:21 UTC
Yeah, it's mostly details and the word count, but they still get under my skin big time. I don't hate it or anything, but sometimes I just think everything could have been done better. Then again, when do I not? lol

But thank you so much for your words, they mean a lot ♥

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x_saru_x June 26 2010, 11:17:37 UTC
It thankfully is, lol.

No worries, will definitely continue!
Thank you for reading ♥

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