Summer

[fianna_fialena]

Frank/Mikey, for lena_gealach. :) Let me know what you think, kay? It's still very rough, really. :) I will edit.

For prompt #63 - Summer. :)

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Comments

[lena_gealach]

Awwy Frank/Mikey pour moi? ♥ I like it very muchly love, the whole idea, and the last part, it was pretty. It is pretty rough, like you said, a bit rushed in the beginning maybe? But I like it. The ending made me smile.

Basically the whole Frank tickling thing was cute.

I’m standing in front of the window, watching the rain drizzle outside. It’s the kind of weather he hates. Rain always keeps him inside, and Frank hates being inside, more than anything. A soft smile fights its way onto my face, despite my melancholy mood. His hands are snaking around my waist and his chin rests on my shoulder.

This brought a huge smile on my face, because I could kind of picture it, it's sweet.

Also, I got a new haircut, which is in fact a notsonew haircut, but whatever. ♥

[fianna_fialena]

Well, y'know. it just kinda... wrote itself. The pairing I mean. I wanted something playful, and Gee/Frank is always ANGSTY. Plus I'm testing my limits. ^-^ No angst, and a different pairing. ^-^

You made me smiiiiile. ^-^

And ye!s I read! Straight, huh? :p I HOPE YOU DIDN'T CUT IT ALL THE WAY SHORT! :o

[lena_gealach]

Straight, huh?

That was temporarily confusing :P

I wanna wriiiiite, I think I should, tonight maybe. ♥

[foxtrot_pasta]

It reminds me of memories that I wish I had, strange as it may seem.

If you cut that sentence I'm never speaking to you again.

Kidding :P But it's perfect, and you should keep it definitely, even though you told me everything before the flashback would change.

I like it a lot :) It's short and sweet and to the point and people being happy with what they have is never a bad thing :D

You could probably change the wording in some places, though; look here:

Maybe I’m being emo? I don’t know. People always say I certainly look it, maybe the emo from my hair is contagious or something.

I just… I don’t really know what I wish really.

I can't really point to exactly what it is here, but the transition is a bit weak, like you just wrote it to get on with the good stuff (wait, is this part of what I need to ignore? I won't say anything more about it then cause I think it is, you van ask me later if you wanna hear more though there's not much more to say--RAMBLING)

...I was going to say something about It’s not working either, Frankie,