they lied when they said the good die young (Patrick/Pete, PG)

[fianna_fialena]

They lied when they said the good die young (Fall Out Boy gen)
(1210 words) // PG
for January 23rd.
Soundtracked by Anberlin’s Alexithymia. I strongly recommend you put it on, because the effect won’t be as good if you don’t. (Plus it’s an awesome song.)

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Comments

[megyal]

Shit, Fi. Holy shit. Oh. I mean, the whole thing had me in a state of constant anguish and then the last line just made me break. I think you captured the emotions well, of those people who've had someone missing, the limbo they're in.

Oh oh, my heart.

[fianna_fialena]

Hee. *patches up heart* I'm so very happy you liked it. Because the whole while I was writing this, I was just kind of going THIS IS SO WEIRD WTF!

:D <3

[rosiedoes]

Oh, burn.

That was exceptionally well captured, and while I don't for a minute believe it's the case, the way people want to believe Pete is some times, could actually make you think that he'd do that.

Keep him around, that is.

Great fic. Loved it.

[fianna_fialena]

Yeah. A lot of people (myself excluded, because I don't seriously think that this is the case) think he could do that.

Thank you! <3 :D

[fixmein_45]

I am kind of astonished at the moment, at the last line possibly, or the entire story, and I liked how you tied everything back to that one night. Not a lot of people can do that without it sounding repetitive, but you pulled it off nicely.

[fianna_fialena]

Thank you! <3

[fianna_fialena]

Your comment made me squee a little! :D

Because 1. yay! comment! and 2: I know you! And by know you I mean, I've seen you around on spifftastic's journal! But, y'know, people who are awesome by relation to awesome Seph commenting on my fic! :D

But I'm sorry I killed you. *patches up* Shall I write a happy fluffy to make it up to you?

[fianna_fialena]

*G* :D :D Except in my head, you were always a guy. And I was so confused by the Jodie on your (very very very sexy) Jwalk icon. *hides with blush*

:D :D I'll show you mine if you show me yours? Cept less sexual innuendo and my journal is mostly unlocked, but, y'know. *blush* I'd really like to be your friend? :D

[tbsavafob6]

i read it and it broke my heart in half. i felt so sad. you love to make me cry don't you?lol

[fianna_fialena]

Lol! Yes, it's my secret life goal. Darn, my plan revelead en my intentions foiled!

That said, thank you for your comment! <3 Sorry it made you cry! *hugs*