The Life on Mars Anonymous Pornfest

Jan 26, 2008 17:43

Please Note: I've declared the Pornfest over (as I can't be bothered to keep the prompt list up-to-date!) So any new prompts posted will be deleted. However, I do encourage you to post any anon fic in response to the existing prompts and comment on the lovely responses that we've already got ( Read more... )

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Fiction - Helping Hand - Part 6 anonymous January 29 2008, 15:00:15 UTC
Feeling Gene shake the last drips out over his flat stomach, Sam watched as Gene’s cock hardened and thickened as soon as he was finished, reaching out to Sam, begging for attention. After that display, Sam was only too happy to give it. Having Gene pee on him was one of the biggest and kinkiest turn ons of his life, and he couldn’t help but lunge towards his cock and swallow it down in one go, desperately trying to impress Gene with his sucking skills. From the way he shouted and cursed as Sam gulped him down, he’d say he was suitably impressed.

Kneeling in the warm golden puddle beneath him, Sam swallowed Gene down to the balls, rolling his throat muscles desperately as he reached up to palm his balls and stroke over and in his arsehole. It wasn’t the most technically superior blowjob he could have given, but his desperation and eagerness to please more than made up for any failing in the skill department, and Gene was soon cumming in thick, hot spurts straight down Sam’s welcoming throat.

After Sam had licked him clean, Gene pulled himself back and reached to turn the taps on, adjusting them until the water was the right temperature, and letting it clean the bottom of the tub. When the puddle had washed away, he stuck the plug in and let the bath fill. Moving to kneel down in front of the bath, he slid an unusually quiet and contented
Sam to him, and began stroking his back as he pressed their foreheads together.

“So,” Sam began nervously, making himself look into Genes eyes. “You enjoyed that as much as me, right?”

“Yeah,” Gene replied, rueful smile in place, reaching beside him for a
sponge. “You’re mine now, you get that right?”

“Yeah,” Sam responded, smiling happily as Gene wet the sponge and began to clean him down. There was a few minutes of silence where Gene kept opening his mouth to say something but decided against it at the last second. As he reached up to wash Sam’s chest, he apparently made a decision.

“Love you, you know that right?” Sam’s smile widened to the point that his jaw ached, and he didn’t care that Gene wouldn’t look him in the eyes, or that he made his declaration while washing pee off his chest.

“Yeah. Love you too.”

Gene nodded and though he tried to hide it, Sam caught the tiny smile that curved his lips. “Right.”

End

There was a bit of a stuff up and there are 2 part 5's, but you all can figure it out right?

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*Mod* anonymous January 29 2008, 15:23:37 UTC
Well, I've deleted the duplicate Part Five, so it should read straight through now. And I've linked all the parts in the original post.

Lovely piece! Thanks for taking part!

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Re: *Mod* anonymous January 29 2008, 16:43:48 UTC
Thanks a lot. It's a real bugger not being able to fix :P

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Re: Fiction - Helping Hand - Part 6 anonymous January 29 2008, 19:06:40 UTC
Sooooooooooooooooooooooo
hoooooooooooooooootttttttt.

<3

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Re: Fiction - Helping Hand - Part 6 anonymous January 29 2008, 19:45:28 UTC
Thanks! I was worried about that one, so 'hot' is a comforting review :)

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Feedback anonymous January 29 2008, 19:31:33 UTC
Can I just say wow, you are one hell of a writer. This was not something I expected to find hot and yet it was completely and utterly hot. Very well done.

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Re: Feedback anonymous January 29 2008, 20:03:34 UTC
That's great, I'm really glad you were able to enjoy this. I did want for this to come out as not being just about the act but what it meant.

Your review made me happy! Thanks!

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Feedback anonymous January 30 2008, 00:08:37 UTC
Sam certainly knows what he wants and found the courage to tell Gene. It is a difficult subject and you've handled it beautifully. V sexy and well written. Would love to see more from you.

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