Fanfic: NCIS / Dexter: Give The Boys A Great Big Hand - II

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Here's the second part of my NCIS / Dexter / multiple crossover.

Part 1 is here. This chapter won't make much sense if you haven't read it!

No special warnings, apart from BIG spoilers for Dexter Seasons 2, 3 and 4.

Comments

[paratti]

Great fun.

[ffutures]

Thanks - I think the theory actually makes a lot of sense if you don't know the real story.

[kickair8p]

Not good with commenting on WiPs, but want more of this.

~

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Thanks, I'll try to keep you interested.

[dsample]

> "I'll make sure she's okay vefore she's cleared for duty."

There also seem to be some commas and periods that somehow got replaced by 'à's.

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Sorry, something went wrong in converting the Word file to HTML. I started to edit them out and fell asleep!

[dsample]

Another thing: hard and soft are terms that are usually applied to consonants in English, not vowels. Vowels are long, and short, and Ziva's pronunciation of David is with a short a.

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Thanks - now fixed.

[karohemd]

Really far fetched theory! ;)
Dexter's sister is spelt Deborah in the NCIS bit and then Debrah in the Dexter bit, while the official spelling is Debra. Obv. it's all dialogue so doesn't really matter.
In the first line of the Dexter bit, the second Trinity has an i missing.
Nice one, though, looking forward to the next part.

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Thanks - now fixed.