Forbidden Delight, Chapter 2/??

[fffriction1984]

Title: Forbidden Delight
Author: fffriction1984  [tbsupervillains ]
Chapters: 2/??
Genre: AU, POV, voyeurism (is that even a genre…?)
Warnings: none for this chapter
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: no real pairings yet
Characters: Uruha, Ruki, Reita, OC's so far
Disclaimer: I only own the idea to the story and the OFC, Uruha and the rest of the gazemen pretty much belong to themselves

Comments

[tbsupervillains]

As far as the spamming is concerned they shouldn't get their panties in knots anymore because I decided I won't post any more updates to comms. The people who appreciate my writing and are not bothered by it are on my friends-list anyway. *shrugs*
And yes, the bit about me saying gay relationships aren't real, that's what I was talking about. That might only be one lie, but it still is a lie. I never said anything like that and it's just stupid. Maybe I'm over the top when it comes to this, but if there's anything I hate it's when people say things about me that aren't tru. Anyway, I'm not going to justify my reasons why I write het instead of slash. And I do like to read slash, when there's a plot and nicely developed characters. Those people should really check their sources instead of writing such crap about someone they don't even know.

Three-way relationships can turn out good. If I were you I'd give it a try. I almost made my OFC Kagura have a threesome with Aoi and Uruha, but that had to be in the plot because otherwise it would have destroyed my storyline. lol.
And even if you give her more fine-tuning, don't forget what you said about people equating every OC with Mary-Sue, right.

I need to go to bed anyways, it's 2.27am and I need to get up early. But I look forward to hearing from you. :3

[atriums]

Ah~ Personally it doesn't matter to me whether or not you said that. People are entitled to have their own opinions, but -- in the event you had said that -- that doesn't mean you could go traipsing around and saying that. That's just my opinion, not putting you on the spotlight or anything. ^^; There's no reason you should ever have to justify yourself about things like this because, as I previously said, people are entitled to their own opinions. You're different from them, so you're bound to have conflicting opinions. A preference of het to slash just happens to be one of them. XD Either or is good with me~ 83

Most of Sakae's fine tuning is to make her a more...normal person, I guess. I was fourteen when I started that story years ago, so back then she wasn't very "real." But it's been years, and the idea has been incubating, so it's getting better since I've evolved since then. XD I definitely do intend to write the three-way relationship, and I intend to make it as realistic as possible. That's most of the fine-tuning taking place. (I've seen some people write fics that just...well, they just shouldn't, because it lacks complete realism.)

I just reread my first comment, too, and I realized how rude that sounded. T__T I'm sorry, it wasn't my intention! Also, since I would like to continue reading this, would you mind if I added your fic journal with mine? (miseishi) ^-^

[fffriction1984]

Right, everyone's entitled to their own opinion, to each his own, etc. And now that we all know they hate my writing it's all fine and I can move on (though I am still bothered about the way they said it, but that's just me, so ignore me... lol). The thing is this: My life sucked, it sucked big time lately and writing was the only thing I enjoyed and to read things like that about the only thing you cherish.... sucks. But yeah, I'm forcing myself to move on and not pay attention to this.

Fourteen? I don't even remember what fourteen was like because it's too long ago, but I do remember that back then I wrote self-inserts. XD Crappy self-inserts XD
I've seen some people write fics that just...well, they just shouldn't, because it lacks complete realism.
That's the same when I read some slash fics and the writers turn men into girls - they behave like girls, they talk like girls...

Don't worry about your commoent sounding rude because on the other hand you were the first person who has ever given me the criticism I've always wanted, so it's all fine. ^^ And sure, I'll add you back then and if I have the time I'll check out your writing too. ^^