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Don't Say a Word - Aeris/Tifa (FF7)

Jul 21, 2009 14:11

Title: Don't Say a Word
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Pairing: Aeris / Tifa
Prompt: Writing
Rating: T
Words: 794
Spoilers: End of Disc 1
Author's Note: My first Yuri, my first drabble.

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pairing: aerith/tifa, fandom: ffvii - ogc, author: mr_ite, prompt: writing

Comments 5

hamimifk July 22 2009, 07:54:49 UTC

Wow, I really loved this. It was beautiful, sad, and sweet all at once. I love your use of words especially. ^.^ They made me tingly.

:\ Though I have to point out that this is a drabble community with word limits. Namely, a drabble should be either 100, 200, 300, 400, or 500 words exactly. I'll allow this ficlet because I really enjoy it, but if you'd be so kind to stick to the rules in any future posts, I'd really appreciate it.

^.^ I hope that doesn't chase you off. I'd really love to see more of your work here! :D

mr_ite July 22 2009, 08:54:05 UTC

Oh whoops! I guess I should have read the rules. I got a little overexcited when I was directed here from the Genesis Award forums, and I sort of barfed this out immediately.
Thanks for keeping it! My next one will be... within the rules.

hamimifk July 23 2009, 23:32:21 UTC

^.^ S'ok. I'm not a crazy, strict person - I'm rather flexible so it's cool. ^_^ Awesome.

m_aenea July 28 2009, 00:26:09 UTC

you know, Aerith being illiterate is quite plausible - but this is the first time i've even considered the idea. XD very original.

i enjoy the way you integrated magic so neatly into the story. the actual writing lessons are well-developed too.

basically i loved this to pieces. ^^;

ff_raiya March 9 2012, 17:22:12 UTC

I really liked it!
ive done stupid thing like that in the past and regretted it straight away so i know how she feels.

very good