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machina_dues in ff_yuri_drabble

Count to Five

Jul 07, 2011 10:05

Title: Count to Five
Fandom: FFXIII
Pairing: Implied Fang/Vanille
Prompt: Evening/Night
Rating: PG-13
Words: 100
Spoilers: None

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fandom: ffxiii - ogc, author: machina_dues, prompt: evening/night, pairing: fang/vanille

Comments 7

ryu19 July 7 2011, 15:15:54 UTC

Is this your OTP for FFXIII? Nice drabble here.

machina_dues July 7 2011, 15:22:16 UTC

OTP? I'm not familiar with the term...

ryu19 July 7 2011, 15:27:51 UTC

One True Pairing. Basically it means your favorite pairing for a particular fandom.

machina_dues July 7 2011, 15:55:49 UTC

Oh, right. Actually, by that term, my OTP would be Serah/Vanille. I dunno why, but I like that pairing.

silvr_dagger July 18 2011, 05:27:56 UTC

Nice! I have yet to play FFXIII, so I can't judge on characterization here, but in terms of writing and pacing, this is probably my favorite of yours. You do a very good job creating a sense of urgency, and this line - She smells of combat. She has been fighting. The Cie’th knock at Oerba’s gates. - in particular really works well.

machina_dues July 18 2011, 23:58:30 UTC

Thank you. :)
You should definitely play this game it is amazing.

athenemiranda August 14 2012, 04:12:51 UTC

This is lovely. It has such a good rhythm.