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Aug 21, 2006 21:32

Title: Bedevil, Chapter 8
Characters: Mal/Jayne
Rating: NC-17 rough graphic m/m sex
Notes: This might be a little long, hope that's alright.

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And he didn't try to argue, in fact Jayne's mind was completely occupied to the feel of Mal's hand on his John Thomas and Mal's lips on his neck. He leaned his head back against the ( Read more... )

mal/jayne, bedevil, slash

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tempering_steal August 22 2006, 04:16:30 UTC
Something about that felt different than the expected here. I don't know. also, felt a bit rushed. more to say. not sure yet.

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anxiety_junkie August 22 2006, 12:21:24 UTC
Guh. *melts*

Amazing, hawt, fantastic! *gets into cold shower*

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tempering_steal August 22 2006, 12:32:53 UTC
Ok. after reading it again during a typical just-woke-up semi-aroused state, it's very hot, still rushed, would've liked to have it stretched out a bit. but it's damn good

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rinalin August 23 2006, 04:34:39 UTC
*claim*

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