Madness

Apr 21, 2007 17:08

290 words, young Simon and River, PG-rated.

I used what is apparently the correct spelling of crap (goushi, rather than go-se), but after banging my head against my desk for several minutes, I decided to leave off the accent marks. Sue me. (This is why I usually try not to use Mandarin in my fic.)

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irish_ais April 22 2007, 00:45:34 UTC
Hee. This was so cute! I love the way you write the River and Simon sibling dynamic.

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budclare April 25 2007, 20:41:03 UTC
Thanks. :)

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llaras May 3 2007, 00:30:16 UTC
Yes, very cute. :-)I love seeing them together before the goushi hits the fan.

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budclare May 3 2007, 04:00:27 UTC
Thanks. :)

(And now I'm reconsidered the go se again. Language changes quite a bit in several hundred years. Goushi -> go se is probably a reasonable change... *needs to stop obsessing over dumb things*)

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