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Alive (Simon, G) for Challenge 143, 'voices'

Nov 05, 2006 18:19

Title: Alive
Author: Jen (jazzfic)
Rating: G
Prompt: Voices, for Challenge 143
Character: Simon
Words: 538
Disclaimer: Property of Joss.
Summary: Simon has always tried to do what's right.

( her voice became a loop like his father's had been, but where once he had pushed it aside, now it drove him to act )

143 (voices)

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jazzfic November 7 2006, 07:27:31 UTC

Thankyou!

mar_sin_nua November 5 2006, 08:06:48 UTC

Very nice :)

jazzfic November 7 2006, 07:28:12 UTC

You're welcome :D

biases November 5 2006, 08:30:01 UTC

Beautiful work. Simon has such depth to him and I often forget that in my quest for Mal/River. You captured the challenges he would have faced and wrote his inner stubbornness/determination well.

Lovely job! ♥

jazzfic November 7 2006, 07:33:18 UTC

Thanks a bunch. Yeah, I forget him too. He has such a different voice to the others, but I actually find he's quite compatible with my writing (if that makes sense *g*). I love 'verse speak, but it's nice to be eloquent for a change.

srichard November 5 2006, 16:07:34 UTC

Oh, that's simply beautiful. My poor, precious Simon.

jazzfic November 7 2006, 07:33:57 UTC

Oh, thanks :)

sandoz_iscariot November 6 2006, 02:39:23 UTC

Very nicely done. It was an interesting perspective on Simon's relationship with Gabriel.

jazzfic November 7 2006, 07:35:41 UTC

Thanks so much!