Comments | ff_friday: Christenings

budclare in ff_friday

Christenings

Jul 16, 2004 00:52

170 words. And I nearly forgot to post this. And then I had to delete two short paragraphs, because I screwed up and didn't have time to fix it. *facepalm ( Read more... )

059 (character: simon)

Comments 12

kelly_girl July 16 2004, 05:20:09 UTC

I like it and the name thing and I imagine his colleagues did talk about him for awhile. I still wonder what his parents told people about him and River.

budclare July 16 2004, 05:59:05 UTC

Thanks.

shetiger July 16 2004, 05:32:24 UTC

Very pretty!

budclare July 16 2004, 05:58:54 UTC

Thank you.

foodsthatcan July 16 2004, 05:34:01 UTC

bud, it was great. Wonderful hook with the opening sentence. And I liked the "non-fugitive fish."

(And I'm just going to assume the girl is the one I want her to be. ;))

One typo correction: it's fared, not faired. :)

budclare July 16 2004, 05:55:06 UTC

I'm glad you liked it.

"One typo correction: it's fared, not faired."

*blinksblinks*

*snickers*

Um, yeah. You can tell that I proofread this at the last possible minute, can't you? Thanks. :)

hawkmoth July 16 2004, 12:23:05 UTC

Nicely done!

budclare July 18 2004, 05:14:05 UTC

Thanks. :)

oh_mumble July 16 2004, 13:05:37 UTC

::loves:: Oh, just, love it!

So glad you remembered to post this ;)

budclare July 18 2004, 05:15:50 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.