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Spiral, Crumbling; FFVIII, PG

Apr 29, 2007 23:45

Title: Spiral, Crumbling
Game: FFVIII
Characters: Ultimecia, Rinoa (?)
Rating/Warning: PG, spoilers for game ending
Notes: For thebaconfat's challenge to write a one-sentence fic about Ultimecia and confusion. What comes, after it all ends?

( The world bleeds out through her fingers, and she turns around - )

Comments 2

irish_ais April 30 2007, 04:10:23 UTC

That's beautiful. Compelling, powerful, and so very Ultimecia.

Nice to see work like this--she's a really rarely written character, and you've done her justice. In one sentence, no less! :D

aleriadeufania May 2 2007, 04:02:59 UTC

So perfect. I am, indeed, a supporter of the Rinoa-is-Ultimeca idea and you portray this inner conflict so well!