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Aug 29, 2010 05:13


Hello, shiny new fandom. ♥
Haven't written anything in ages, haven't gotten beyond Ep1... But I just couldn't resist. So, yeah.
Not beta-ed and written at an ungodly hour... Feel free to point out errors and such.

Untitled Ficlet
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Rating: NC-17 / Mature Audiences ONLY
Spoilers: None
Summary: Smut. No, seriously, that's it.
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nc-17, fic, sherlock/john, sherlock

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danglingdingle August 29 2010, 05:10:11 UTC
My love for detailed porn is never ending. If there was anything this astonishing fic was missing, was the description of body hair (one of my kinks...can't help missing it. Sorry) But the nibbling and biting and nip and the slickess, oh my.

I especially enjoyed the ending, the leisurely way Sherlock needs to be inside John Still.

Thank you for this marvelous morning.

*instant mem*

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feuervogel87 August 29 2010, 18:48:46 UTC
Oh, you're very welcome, darling. Thank you for the comment. ;)

Your kink would have fit perfectly, wouldn't it? Because I imagine Sherlock as very tactile, once he allows himself to want another person. And of course he would catalogue every detail about his partner and the sensations that sparked in him, because he can let himself really feel things for once. In my mind it's more about emotionally connecting with this one important person than physical gratification, you know?
So having him keep a connection after the fact somehow seemed the perfect way to end this.
I'm glad that came across somewhat. :)

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oddrid August 29 2010, 05:47:22 UTC
Oh fuckkkkkkkkkkk this was incredibly hot. Definitely mem'ing. Thanks for sharing!

Guh.

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feuervogel87 August 29 2010, 18:53:23 UTC
Thank you!

Is it wrong of me to find it gratifying when people swear at me because they liked something? *grins*

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wildejoy August 29 2010, 05:49:42 UTC
OH HOLY HELL.

THAT WAS FUCKING HOT LIEK WHOA. Detailed porn is the best kind. And usually I get thrown out by clinical speech but with Sherlock it's so perfect I think it made it even hotter.

YOU ARE AWESOME AND PLEASE WRITE MORE PORN, IS WHAT I AM TELLING YOU. I shall surely wither and die if you don't.♥

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feuervogel87 August 29 2010, 19:00:22 UTC
Dying for lack of porn... wonder what Sherlock would make of that? *laughs*

I tried to keep the technical terms... relevant, for lack of a better word - as something that Sherlock uses to orient himself on, but nothing more than that. 'Cause this wasn't really meant as an exercise in observation, was it? ;)

I shall endeavour to come up with more porny goodness, m'dear. *bows*

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nannon_yay August 29 2010, 06:01:47 UTC
I really like how detailed this is, considering the characters involved. The scientific terms are what make it more unique and in character, especially for Sherlock. It's hot as hell as well, which is a bonus. Brilliant. <3

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feuervogel87 August 29 2010, 19:02:53 UTC
Yes, well. Where there is Sherlock, there are details to be observed. 'Tis but a logical deduction. ;)
Glad you liked it!

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resounding_echo August 29 2010, 06:25:03 UTC
Wow Sherlock does PWP better than most do PWP. Thank you for sharing.

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feuervogel87 August 29 2010, 19:03:56 UTC
Of course it does, it's Sherlock! :D
Thank you for taking the time to comment.

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