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michellejparker April 8 2013, 19:24:33 UTC
OH HOLY LORD

LET ME TAKE A MINUTE

WHAT THE FUCK TORRES YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BENT THAT ASS AND BEG FOR MORE. Oh God. You virgin.

AND YOU IKER YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO TAKE IT ALL IN AS GOOD BOYS DO AND YOU SHOULD GIVE HIM A HELL OF A BJ thank Lord you showed some of that bad horny boy attitude when shutting David up

AND CESC WITH PERSIE OH MEIN GOTT PERFECTION though I still see the Spaniard whining over Gerard. No bitch, you are supposed to deliciously run into loving arms of other amazingly handsome man, who will make Pique scream out of jealousy. Though, I hope Fab will quickly realize that the appereance of this one particular Dutch will bring his special boy to the yard. (I love writing this stupid-ass comparisions. I know, you love my comments. Hahahaha. I love your story by the way.)

OH AND XABI I have to refer to the previous chapter and tell you what I had in mind, when I was reading it. And I need to say, I'm kind of thinking Mikel may turn into this psychotic-toxic-stalking kind of ex-lover. Obviously, only when fcking Steven Gerrard decides to show up and mess perfectly figured Alono's life and that will lead to Xabi leaving Mikel and Mikel going crazy and ugh, I'm in need of drama.

As to say, because that's not the end (hell no!!! when i'm coming, i'm always making it a longer stay) of course my favourite pairing is Daniel and Fernando. Maybe because my own story revolves around these two characters and I just love them together and yeah, I think I already wrote you why they seem to appear so extremely good to me as a pairing. But, what I want to discuss tonight, THIS LITTLE MAKING OUT HERE YOU DESCRIBED. I was in this dying-stage, when suddenly, Fernando decided to go all virgin. Okay, that was cute. His innocence is appealing. And mixed with his freckles and blonde hair and Daniel's badass attitude makes it all even more perfect BUT JUST FCKING WHY. I wanted him to spread those legs and let Agger do nasty things to him. BUT OF COURSE NOT. Not even bits of sexual slash joy on this Monday afternoon. YOU LADY ARE GOING TO HELL FOR FINISHING IT LIKE THIS.

BUT. This is how I see the future: Daniel and Nando fighting over the fact who's gay and who's not, that will lead to one trying the others strength and then one day they are going to burst out with this sexual tension and explicitly horny scenes will appear and my soul will be satisfied. NO BUT SERIOUSLY. I WANT BOTH OF THEM TO GIVE IN THEN GO INTO REGRETTING/FIGHTING STAGE THEN GIVE IN AGAIN AND THEN REALIZE THEY ARE SORT OF FALLING IN LOVE (hello by lionel richie playing in the background) SO THE TENDER SEX WILL COME AND THEN FERNADO WILL STOP WHINING VIRGINLY AND HE WILL GO ALL HORNY-DEVIL ON DANIEL. Just a little insight on the future. Hahahahaha. You must think I'm crazy. But actually, MAYBE I'M. I don't care.

This story is fabolous. I love it. Every single word. Every single description.

"The first alien sound in the almost-eternity of heavy breaths and staggering moans suddenly drove all the fog in his mind away."

AND THE LIVEJOURNAL NOBEL PRIZE GOES FOR YOU.

Oh, the last thing. More Iker/David sexiness and I'm devoted to your story forever.

PS. Excuse my bad language. Horny implications and not commenting the previous chapter. I solemnly swear of becoming a lovely reader. BUT NOT IN THIS LIFE GURL. *devilish mimics and lucifer awful laugh playing in the background* You are forever damned and my comment will always look like this. THIS WERE JUST MY FEELS. I ain't feelin sorry.

THE STORY IS GREAT. THIS IS THE END OF THIS REVIEW.

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fernedakki April 20 2013, 08:59:37 UTC
Wow, that's long, and I love long reviews.

You like slutty!Nando, don't you? LOL, I like him like that, too, but he'll not be not that slutty in this story. Apparently, not now, but we'll see later.

Iker did take it all in, he didn't even hesitate this time. And yeah, of course, more to cummmm.

Gerard/Cesc/Robin - Will Gerard ever realize or be an idiot forever?

Mikel - LOL!

And i love your reviews, keep them coming, though horny and bad languages and whatever!

Thanks.

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