Comments | fengirl88: fic: Mosaic

fengirl88

fic: Mosaic

Apr 03, 2011 00:19

Title: Mosaic
Author: fengirl88
Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Pairing/Characters: Sherlock/John, Mycroft, Mummy
Rating: R for themes
Warnings: implied past sexual abuse, implied incest, traumatic memory
Wordcount:~1250
Disclaimer: They're still not mine. An image here is adapted from Peter Dickinson's The Last House Party; spoilers for that novel.
Summary: The ( Read more... )

rating: r, category: angst, warning: traumatic memory, fanworks: fic, warning: implied past sexual abuse, character: mycroft holmes, pairing: sherlock/john, warning: implied incest

Comments 15

darthhellokitty April 3 2011, 02:02:57 UTC

Oh my god - the image of Sherlock taking apart the model plane is amazing.

This is an incredible story.

fengirl88 April 3 2011, 10:05:32 UTC

thank you very much - I wanted something like the image in Peter Dickinson (see disclaimer), but it took a while to find the right thing. I'm working on what should be the last part now, but it may take a while.

marysutherland April 3 2011, 07:24:55 UTC

This is wonderful. Very restrained and yet such striking images of tightly-coiled emotions - Sherlock and the plane, Mycroft's weight. And you manage to get such creepy unease into the image of someone holding their child by their wrist rather than their hand.

fengirl88 April 3 2011, 10:11:49 UTC

thank you - I'm so glad you think so. and thank you very much for your help with this one. I knew what Mycroft had to remember about Sherlock, but not how to open up that memory, until you suggested that Mycroft might look for evidence in family photographs.

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fengirl88 April 3 2011, 10:12:47 UTC

thank you very much - I am so glad you do. *hugs you back*

shehasathree April 3 2011, 08:19:26 UTC

Oh wow. Sherlock slowly and methodically dismantling and plane - such strong imagery.

fengirl88 April 3 2011, 10:14:55 UTC

thank you very much - as I said to darthhellokitty, I wanted something like the image from Peter Dickinson (see disclaimer), but it took a while to work out exactly what it should be.

turante April 3 2011, 17:18:10 UTC

I am speechless.every little detail is perfect, fitting in the bigger picture flawlessly.
I am amazed and eager to know how this is going to end (even if I do have a vague idea).
*hugs*
Thanks for writing this, dear!

fengirl88 April 3 2011, 20:47:14 UTC

thank you so much for this lovely comment. I'm working on what I think is the final part now, though I may not be able to get everything wrapped up in one more instalment...

*hugs you back*