Drabbletag - Paramedic

Jun 28, 2014 19:07

Title: Feelings Nursed
Prompt: Drabbletag 5 - Paramedic
Fandom: Disney
Pairing: Mulan/Pocahontas
Rating: PG
Word count: 250

The warmth of Mulan’s skin has faded to something more comfortable, the dangerous heat of her fever finally broken. )

author: salmon_pink, drabbletag5, fandom: disney

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ahavah June 28 2014, 18:12:28 UTC
This is fantastic. I always struggle with present tense, and this works well.

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salmon_pink June 28 2014, 19:24:39 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I've gotten to the point now where it feels weird if I don't use present tense, it's become my default. XD

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femme_slash_fan June 28 2014, 18:15:57 UTC
Oh YUM!

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salmon_pink June 28 2014, 19:24:45 UTC
Thanks! :D

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femme_slash_fan June 28 2014, 19:36:45 UTC
Your welcome.

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temari778 June 28 2014, 18:23:01 UTC
This is great. :D Much better than mine.

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salmon_pink June 28 2014, 19:25:21 UTC
Not at all, I loved the nod to Pocahontas' visions in yours, it was a super imaginative use of the prompt! :)

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aerisahale June 29 2014, 03:12:49 UTC
This was beautiful! I love the way you made Pocahontas a healer using poultices from the land. :)

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salmon_pink June 29 2014, 10:46:12 UTC
Thanks so much! I was pondering over the prompt for a while, since it was so fun I wanted to give it a shot, and I've never written these two together before, so I'm glad you liked the way I approached it. They'd make a formidable and beautiful team. ;D

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raktajinos June 29 2014, 05:42:07 UTC
that was fabulous. I need to read more of them now haha.

I'm also silently wishing that OUAT will bring Pocahontas on as Mulan's new love interest

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salmon_pink June 29 2014, 10:47:05 UTC
They're an incredible pairing, I definitely want to write more for them! And I would die if they bought Pocahontas into OUAT and let her fall for Mulan, that would be perfection!

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