IDoF 2010 Drabblethon!

Jul 16, 2010 04:35

Okay, it's very nearly officially July 17th in Line Island time, so it's time to start our Drabblethon! If you still want to submit prompts, don't worry feel free to go ahead and add them to the previous post for the next few hours - I'll add anything posted over the night to this post when I wake up in the morning.

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we talked as soft as chalk, angel the series, fred/cordy, visions of the obvious websofseaweed July 16 2010, 10:39:47 UTC
"I like you," Fred giggles with her typical Texan twang one Tuesday afternoon ( ... )

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Re: we talked as soft as chalk, angel the series, fred/cordy, visions of the obvious sheepfairy July 17 2010, 05:33:55 UTC
Aww, so cute! I really love Fred in this.

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Re: we talked as soft as chalk, angel the series, fred/cordy, visions of the obvious websofseaweed July 17 2010, 06:21:04 UTC
Thanks :)))

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Re: we talked as soft as chalk, angel the series, fred/cordy, visions of the obvious cmk418 July 17 2010, 23:48:49 UTC
Wonderful! It's really sweet and you've captured both women perfectly.

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Dollhouse, Adelle/Claire: Broken (PG-13) misicka47 July 16 2010, 11:38:40 UTC
Adelle DeWitt did not like to play with dolls when she was little. Now, as an adult woman, she still disliked the idea of Dolls.

She could clearly see the appealed of it: to have someone who would love you endlessly, enjoy all of your sexual kinks and strange methods, see your weaknesses as your greatest strengths and no matter how fat, ugly or rude you act, it (it, for Adelle couldn't bring herself to call the software anything else) would love you and worship the ground you walk on forever. Yes, Adelle could see the appeal. And yet, such perfection did not seem appealing to her. Maybe it was because she had witnessed how pathetic the rich people who hired her Dolls were. Or maybe it was because she saw how such 'relationships' only damaged what had already been fragile in their hearts. Love - pretended or real - always hurt when parting came to the picture and with the Dolls, parting always came. Another treatment, another client ( ... )

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Re: Dollhouse, Adelle/Claire: Broken (PG-13) sophia_gratia July 16 2010, 12:05:31 UTC
This is lovely!

And I love that we both, independently, posted stories at almost the same time that both have 'Whiskey', italicized, on a line of its own. ::Applause::

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Re: Dollhouse, Adelle/Claire: Broken (PG-13) sheepfairy July 17 2010, 06:03:38 UTC
Ah, nice. I really like the take on Adelle in this!

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Star Trek: The Next Generation, Deanna Troi/Tasha Yar, dressing up, getting drunk sophia_gratia July 16 2010, 12:02:16 UTC
Laughter, so familiar. Whiskey buzzing in her veins, so strange.

Tasha bent to refill her glass - turquoise at her neck caught the light. Deanna guffawed.

‘What?’

‘That.’

‘It’s Betazoid - I thought you’d like it.’ Tasha’s mind was frank. She didn’t know.

‘Oh, it’s Betazoid. But it doesn’t go around your neck.’

‘Where then?’

‘Your waist.’ She felt Tasha’s blush before she saw it.

‘Ah.’ Tasha re-fastened the clasp at her hip.

‘Not quite.’ Deanna half-choked on her chuckle. ‘You’re... meant to be naked.’

‘... Oh.’ Swigging from the bottle, Tasha stood. Her trousers dropped, then her shirt. ‘Better?’

Whiskey.

‘...Much.’

*

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Re: Star Trek: The Next Generation, Deanna Troi/Tasha Yar, dressing up, getting drunk kellychambliss July 16 2010, 15:38:57 UTC
You're a dab hand with ellipses /g/. Love Tasha of the frank mind.

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Re: Star Trek: The Next Generation, Deanna Troi/Tasha Yar, dressing up, getting drunk sophia_gratia July 16 2010, 15:51:40 UTC
Ooh! Scads of feedback right in time for my lunch break. Bless you.

Glad Tasha worked for you - I've never really had a handle on her, and was worried she'd be washed-out here.

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Re: Star Trek: The Next Generation, Deanna Troi/Tasha Yar, dressing up, getting drunk sheepfairy July 17 2010, 06:12:12 UTC
LOL, this is excellent! Cultural exchanges that end in nakedness are probably the best kind.

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Star Trek: Voyager, Kathryn Janeway/B’Elanna Torres, confusion sophia_gratia July 16 2010, 12:03:44 UTC
The captain likes to touch her crew. A hand firm on a shoulder: pride. Fingertips gentle at an elbow: concern. Palm broad across the back: elation.

B’Elanna finds she’s allowed to touch back. Their minds and their eyes on their work, B’Elanna’s hands learn to touch back.

Firm, on her shoulder: pride. Quick, squeezing her wrist: excitement. (Intellectual; otherwise.)

Brushing across the small of her back: eagerness. (Professional; otherwise.)

The captain’s smile might be encouragement.

Casual, open, on her hip: familiarity. (Desire.)

The captain’s hips shift, imperceptibly. She’s imagining it. Isn't she?

Maybe. No? ...Yes.

The captain smiles. Encouragement?

Maybe.

*

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Re: Star Trek: Voyager, Kathryn Janeway/B’Elanna Torres, confusion kellychambliss July 16 2010, 15:44:47 UTC
I once had a professor who, in discussing the dazzling possibilities of punctuation, talked about "the erotics of the semi-colon." I feel like sending her copies of your exquisite parentheses, dots, and asterisks.

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Re: Star Trek: Voyager, Kathryn Janeway/B’Elanna Torres, confusion sophia_gratia July 16 2010, 15:56:15 UTC
Grinblush.

When you only have a hundred words, punctuation's gotta do some serious heavy lifting.

the erotics of the semi-colon
The phrase alone makes me swoon. I shall use it!

{Oh! And I have a Winn drabble for you that I forgot to post - doing so now. A silly thing, sadly - I despise her too much to do her justice. But it does have an extra asterisk, so there's that.}

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Re: Star Trek: Voyager, Kathryn Janeway/B’Elanna Torres, confusion amles80 July 16 2010, 17:51:09 UTC
I like this very much!

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Star Trek: Deep Space Nine, Kira Nerys/Jadzia Dax, holosuite sophia_gratia July 16 2010, 12:07:08 UTC
‘No!’

‘Aw! Why not?’

‘Just no!’

‘Come on! Please?’

‘Really? I'm so fucking sick of bruising my knuckles on Lancelot’s face.’

‘But you’re cute when you fight. Aagh! Okay! Not cute!’

‘That’s right.’

‘... We could go rafting.’

‘We can go rafting on Bajor.’

‘You’ve never taken me rafting on Bajor!’

‘You’re cute when you’re indignant.’

‘You’re evading the subject!’

‘Keep being so cute about it, and I’ll keep evading.’

‘If I’m so cute, come play in the holosuite with me.’

‘Why bother? We can play right here.’

‘Mmmnf.’

‘Exactly.’

‘...Nerys!’

‘Mm?’

‘That’s... oh. Yes. That’s...’

‘Better than a holosuite?’

‘Yes.’

*

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Re: Star Trek: Deep Space Nine, Kira Nerys/Jadzia Dax, holosuite kellychambliss July 16 2010, 15:49:58 UTC
I adore dialogue-only stories, especially when each speaker is characterized so well and is so...cute.

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Re: Star Trek: Deep Space Nine, Kira Nerys/Jadzia Dax, holosuite sophia_gratia July 16 2010, 15:59:42 UTC
Thanks! But Kira will so kick you. ::offers bandages::

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Re: Star Trek: Deep Space Nine, Kira Nerys/Jadzia Dax, holosuite carawj July 17 2010, 13:36:04 UTC
Hee, I can completely hear them speaking here and it's awesome! :D

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