Comments | femslash100: Drabble Tag 6: Mad Max, Furiosa/Toast, PG

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Drabble Tag 6: Mad Max, Furiosa/Toast, PG

Jul 22, 2015 22:13

Prompt: Scars
Fandom: Mad Max
Pairing: Furiosa/Toast
Rating: PG
Word count: 100

( I don't care about being beautiful. )

drabbletag6, fandom: mad max, author: ember_reignited

Comments 8

jaydestarlight July 23 2015, 05:21:24 UTC

I loved how much emotion you brought into this piece. There's so much going on and I love that you can convey a convincing mixture of action, emotion, and sensuality in such an articulate way. Thanks for writing something so awesome :)

ember_reignited July 23 2015, 18:29:26 UTC

Ah, thank you! I'm thrilled I succeeded in fitting so much into a hundred words.

demoka July 23 2015, 09:29:47 UTC

Oh, I like this! Beautiful ending for a poignant drabble. Thanks for sharing.

ember_reignited July 23 2015, 18:30:29 UTC

And thank you for reading!

swan_secrets July 24 2015, 21:45:22 UTC

A really well filled 100 words, you got so much feeling into this

ember_reignited July 26 2015, 02:24:31 UTC

Thank you! That's always the best thing to hear about a drabble.

silvr_dagger July 26 2015, 04:54:04 UTC

I'm sorry for the late comment - real life's been getting in the way.

Anyways, this is fantastic, with lovely writing, well-drawn characterization and dialogue, and just the right amount of bittersweetness. I especially love Furiosa's line, and how she doesn't talk about beauty even though it comes to mind.

salmon_pink July 26 2015, 20:17:34 UTC

God, so perfect, especially your Furiosa - soft and tender inside, but saying what she knows needs to be said, giving comfort through strength. ♥