Drabbletag5, Sailor Moon, Rei/Minako, firework

[temari778]

Title: Explosion
Author: Temari778
Fandom: Sailor Moon
Pairing: Rei/Minako
Prompt: Firework
Rating: G
Word Count: 245

Comments

[killing_kurare]

Oh my gosh, I just died from cuteness *-*
That was so sweet and I really like the way your writing style brings out the atmosphere of the drabble ...
"Minako would ooh, and aah every other minute, and sometimes gasp if they were really loud, but Rei opted to watch in silence." Perfect :3
"Minako's touch had caused her own set of fireworks to go off inside her" So great how you use that prompt over and over again <3
"Yes...it was..." she agrees, trying to get her breath back." And I don't know why, but i really liked that last sentence ...
I enjoyed it very much, thanks for sharing :)

[fresh_brainss]

This is absolutely adorable, and I love the language you use to describe the fireworks. I'm shipping these two hardcore these days! <3