"The Same Old Story" (BtVS, Buffy/Faith for globalfruitbat)

[minim_calibre]

Title: The Same Old Story
Author: minim_calibre
Recipient: globalfruitbat
Fandom: BtVS
Pairing: Buffy/Faith
Rating: R
Word count: ~1100
Disclaimer: Characters owned by Mutant Enemy and other people who are not me. Couldn't have existed without sathinks.
Summary: "Faith's mouth tastes like saltwater taffy and cigarettes."

Comments

[thelastgoodname]

I loved your use of parentheses; not enough people use them, and it's a terrible shame. I also loved the last line.

And cemetery sex! It's very wrong that there isn't more cemetery sex for a show like Buffy (I'm not sure what enough cemetery sex would look like).

[minim_calibre]

Enough cemetery sex would probably look like a Romero film crossed with Cinemax's late night programming.

(Sometimes, I think I need to go into parentheses detox.)

(I'm a little fonder of them than is perhaps healthy.)

[thelastgoodname]

I refuse to admit there there is such thing as more parentheses than is healthy (because the alternative-namely, emoticons-is so disturbing). Well-used punctuation (such as liberal parentheses) does its job, which is to provide emotional and auditory context to written words. (In my not so humble opinion.)

[livii]

I really like the feel of this one, the style is great. Very vivid and relentless. Nice work on the voices, too.

[minim_calibre]

Thank you!

[globalfruitbat]

Hot! So hot! And I have to say this line her practical, heathered grey cotton blend bra of the sports variety, and thank god those don't have clasps, because her back's against the ground, and Faith's not letting her up any time soon sent me over the top, because so often you get bras pushed up, pulled dow, whatever, and ow! Those clasps would hurt!!

These voices were wonderful, adn this was great. Thank you for this stroy!

[minim_calibre]

*g*

I'm glad you liked it! Yay!

[raveninthewind]

Ohhh. Niiiice. I need a cig, and I don't even smoke. Sensuous, sinuous, sleek women...

Moves her mouth lower, bites down (like Goldilocks: not too hard, not too soft, just right)
Great line.

no more hiding, not from Faith, not any longer
I've always felt that Buffy was hiding something, maybe from herself, in her reaction to Faith.

[minim_calibre]

Thank you!

Man, I love that icon of yours.

[jcalanthe]

*fans self* This is awesome, and hot like a hot hot thing. :)

[minim_calibre]

Yay! Thank you!

Mmm. Icon.