An Inexplicable and Useless Urge, Eden/Anne Marie for escritoireazul

[thrace_]

Title: An Inexplicable and Useless Urge
Author: thrace_
Recipient: escritoireazul
Fandom: Blue Crush
Pairing: Eden/Anne Marie
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2,230
Summary: Title is from a quote by Matt Warshaw

Comments

[escritoireazul]

Thank you, thank you, thank you

[thrace_]

Awesome.

[pene]

this is gorgeous. I'm ALWAYS wanting good blue crush fic and this is lovely.

the phone call particularly set the scene, captured there voices so beautifully and made me feel like I was there with all of them.

I like that Anne-Marie and Eden are so fierce with each other. I like how natural the kiss is, all just how things were going to go.

I love the way you've kept the ocean all around them.

Just gorgeous.

[pene]

um... captured *their* voices. sigh.

[thrace_]

Honstely? I was too busy ogling your icon to notice grammar.

[thrace_]

See? Honestly.

[thelastgoodname]

Blue Crush fic! You are so wonderful for writing Blue Crush fic.

You are so wonderful for writing Eden willing to fly across the ocean in the middle of the night because she's worried about Anne Marie, for writing Anne Marie who is only at her best when Eden pushes her and takes care of her, for writing Penny who is worried about both Eden and Anne Marie (and knows the way to fix it is for them to be together). And I love that they're in love but don't quite know it, until the moment is perfect: just another moment in a long line of moments.

[ijemanja]

Guh. Just wonderful, I love everything about this.

[mesoterica]

as if someone has gone through and checked them for grammatical errors and misspellings. Eden, with her strange accumulation of learning, cobbled together from PBS, old magazines, and random trips to the library.

Oh, holy God. Proofreader!Eden might just be the sexiest thought ever.