Comments | fellow_shippers: Billeh IS pretty.

loose_your_dogs in fellow_shippers

Billeh IS pretty.

Jun 20, 2003 03:34

Suicidal Dom has apparently recovered. And... gone back in time. Umm. Yes.

title: Do You See?
author: loose_your_dogs
pairing: bb/dm, ew/ob implied
rating: R
summary: Billy’s sick of the pretty. And a little envious.
feedback: gimmiethewritercrackyes
disclaimer: I’m a liar, I’m wracked with guilt, and I’m going to hell. Hooray!

Longish and I don't want to spam.( Do You See? )

Comments 28

msilverstar June 19 2003, 11:44:17 UTC

Guh. That starts so angsty and ends up being so incredibly hot!

And Billy’s eyes went huge as blatant yearning rippled across Dom’s so-close face.

Oh my. Had me panting in my office. Can't express. Wow.

Re: loose_your_dogs June 19 2003, 12:03:21 UTC

*squee*
Is it wrong for me to drool over my own fiction?

msilverstar June 19 2003, 20:50:48 UTC

not when it's this good.

I realize that you've got your finger on exactly what it is with Billy, and the rest of them in many ways. There are a lot of prettyboys in the world, there are a lot of handsome men. These ones are sex on legs because of who they are and how they present themselves and what we know about them. Even Orlando, pretty as he is, doesn't beat dozens of male models in looks. But put the lovely person behind the looks... it makes all the difference.

Re: loose_your_dogs June 20 2003, 02:46:36 UTC

Oh good, because I keep reading it and going "huh. did I do that? jesus." Heh.

It certainly does. And that's why I keep going back to the interviews and the articles and so on. The depth of feeling they have for eachother, their wide-open expression of it. It's such a swee surprise. Bless their hearts.

cindyjade June 19 2003, 12:56:30 UTC

this is lovely. ack...just so v. lovely.

*hearts fic*

Re: loose_your_dogs June 20 2003, 01:42:44 UTC

*runs around in circles*
Oh, I missed happy lust-driven Dom.
*pets reflection bunny*

begiled June 19 2003, 15:26:25 UTC

"Want to see more?" Dom’s voice, his accent, was like a bolt of velvet thrown out to spread in the air.

wonderful image.

and I know that "fade to black" is all the thing to make the reder use their imagination...but for the love of mike...you're leaving us hanging here!!!!

::whimper::

Re: loose_your_dogs June 20 2003, 01:52:30 UTC

Omg. I'm sorry. *pets you* I just thought minute detail would drag it out a bit too long and mess with the flow. That and I was about ready to swoon and fall out of my chair...
mmm. chair.

eleanor_lavish June 19 2003, 16:43:49 UTC

I have lost all ability to speak. I really fucking loved this for so many reasons-- you managed to turn self-pitying!Billy (who I love), into confusedashell!Billy (who NEEDS to call me) into this Billy:

He knew how he felt when he was like this - confident as hell and not at all concerned about his own prettiness or lack thereof - but he’d never had a good hard look. Never been in a position to scrutinise. Every angle in his body demanded someone to fuck.

Damn.

*passes out*

Re: loose_your_dogs June 20 2003, 01:58:14 UTC

Okay: imagine if that mental image came into your head of its own accord.
!
*gibbers*
I'm going to have to give my muse a sponge bath. And a foot rub. And generally worship at its feet.

impasto June 19 2003, 20:39:11 UTC

Guh. This just blew me away, with the Billyness and the voyeuristic overtones. And, of course, the utter hotness. Faboo!

Re: loose_your_dogs June 20 2003, 02:05:55 UTC

Tee hee. Thanks :) Mmm, voyerism.
Err. *looks about*
Omg. Your icon is so pretty.
*stares*