Fic: Raising Pyramids. SPN. Dean/Sam, Dean/OMC, Dean/OFC. NC-17

[felisblanco]

I took a nap after driving the little guy to kg and I dreamt there was a flood or an earthquake or some other natural disaster and in all the chaos someone stole my laptop. And while everyone else was trying to be calm and keep things under control I ran around, crying hysterically, frantically trying to call hubby, not to ask if he and the kids

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[star_dancer54]

*flails* Dude, you're like, psychic or something! Just yesterday I was reading over your Normal 'verse, and then what have we here but more from it. *glees* And also? BOYS. It also cracks me up that Sam's apparently reading twincest porn *snickers* However, the ending kinda worries me (Dean's totally going to do it again if he thinks they need the money), and also, the very end? Methinks the Dean protests too much. Like he's trying to convince himself that everything he's done is worth it, no matter what. *sniff*

[fromyourashes]

oh, honey, you needn't have worried. it was achingly sweet. stories like this, in my head, make sense. cuz it's pretty logical that one or the other of the boys had to have been hit on, and perhaps entertained the possibility of having to hustle. poor darlings.

and sweetie, you wrote it wonderfully. perfect ending.

[winchestergirl]

*SQUEE!!!!* you posted !!! dances!!!!!

I love it no matter if you changed it after beta or not honey!!

*glomps*

[aschicca]

Yay! *is damn proud to take all the blame for this*

I loved it! It was sweet, kinda sad and the end made me giggle... plus call me crazy but hustler!Dean is something that makes me all tingly :)

My favourite bit was this: Later that night, holding Sam as he cried his disappointment into Dean’s neck, Dean wondered if it was still worth it. He felt Sam’s heart beat in rhythm with his own, felt Sam’s warm fingers slide across his neck and decided that yes, it was. It was worth every goddamn cent.
So Dean. To him Sam's worth *everything*... that's one of the things I love the most in him *nods*

Thank you Felis! *loves you and the Normal!Verse*
Are you planning to write more in this 'verse?

*hugs you then saves this to memories* :D

[subtly_modded]

oof, that was a punch to the gut. bittersweet and twisted and definitely "Oh Dean...."

you did well with the characters/voices. i could hear the lines in voice.

nicely done!