OMG !!!!! *FLAILS* ....omg honey this is gorgeous !!! oh where do i start ? ...
All he had left was this. A dented car and Dean. And frankly, he had more hopes for saving the Impala than his brother’s shattered heart omg ....i love that ....i thought that as i watched ELAC when Dean was trying to fix the Impala
“Not letting you fuck with my car, Sam.” The voice was flat. Cold. “You’ll turn her into a Winnibego or something.” lmao ...cause he would so say that
They gazed at each other in silence. Then Dean nodded his head in direction of the toolbox. “Hand me that wrench. And if you fuck up the brakes, I’ll kill you.” so typicaly Dean
Dean’s hands trembled slightly as they settled on Sam’s hips and Sam watched Dean close his eyes before he disappeared out of view, forehead resting between Sam’s shoulder blades. Dean shuddered and Sam risked covering one of Dean’s hands with his palm. “You alright?”
this was so visual to me .. this whole scene....
omg honey ... I love you !!! thank you sooo much !!!! I love it !!!!
And I love when people pick out lines. Sometimes you work forever to get a line right or it just clicks perfect at first try but you don't know if it does the same to others as it does for you unless someone mentions it.
I must admit I love the image of Dean standing behind Sam, resting his tired forehead on his brother's broad back. Hidden from view so all Sam can feel is his laboured and warm breathing. It's just very intimate without being weak or too emotional because Dean doesn't do weak or emotional, especially not in the state he was right then.
Oh I love the idea of Sam working on cars. It's just...really, really nice. And every word of this was really vibrant and telling. I love your use of words and how the emotion bleeds out even if it's subtle it's awesomely breathtaking. *squishes*
Thank you! Well, Sam and grease do make a lovely pair. *g*
I'm glad you liked this so much. I was a bit worried I was focusing too much on the drabble format and so robbing it of words it needed. I probably could write it again from a different stand, just as a normal ficlet, but it does seem to work nicely the way it is.
LOL. Wasn't really meant that way. It's more about the grief and longing for the past, for everything to be right again. And even if he knows that's impossible - you can't turn back time or bring back what is dead - what he can revive is their relationship and now, when working on the car has allowed them to connect again, he finally feels ready to accept some more physical comfort. No daddy!kink here. This time. *g*
Thank you so much, darling. I was a bit worried it sounded too stilted since I was constantly aiming for the next even hundred and so had to use my words sparely. And then went over it and had to aim for the next one. lol
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All he had left was this. A dented car and Dean. And frankly, he had more hopes for saving the Impala than his brother’s shattered heart
omg ....i love that ....i thought that as i watched ELAC when Dean was trying to fix the Impala
“Not letting you fuck with my car, Sam.” The voice was flat. Cold. “You’ll turn her into a Winnibego or something.”
lmao ...cause he would so say that
They gazed at each other in silence. Then Dean nodded his head in direction of the toolbox. “Hand me that wrench. And if you fuck up the brakes, I’ll kill you.”
so typicaly Dean
Dean’s hands trembled slightly as they settled on Sam’s hips and Sam watched Dean close his eyes before he disappeared out of view, forehead resting between Sam’s shoulder blades. Dean shuddered and Sam risked covering one of Dean’s hands with his palm. “You alright?”
this was so visual to me .. this whole scene....
omg honey ... I love you !!! thank you sooo much !!!! I love it !!!!
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And I love when people pick out lines. Sometimes you work forever to get a line right or it just clicks perfect at first try but you don't know if it does the same to others as it does for you unless someone mentions it.
I must admit I love the image of Dean standing behind Sam, resting his tired forehead on his brother's broad back. Hidden from view so all Sam can feel is his laboured and warm breathing. It's just very intimate without being weak or too emotional because Dean doesn't do weak or emotional, especially not in the state he was right then.
Sorry I'm so late in answering, baby. *hugs*
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you are so right about that moment when Dean rested his head on Sam's back ... it was so tender and wonderful ..... i loved it so much!!!
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I'm glad you liked this so much. I was a bit worried I was focusing too much on the drabble format and so robbing it of words it needed. I probably could write it again from a different stand, just as a normal ficlet, but it does seem to work nicely the way it is.
*snuggles*
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But Dean wanting Sam's company in the shower after having just said Sam smells like their Dad? ... That kinds disturbed me a bit :D
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Thank you for reading.
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*hugs*
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