Comments | felisblanco: Fic: Five times... 2. November 2004

felisblanco

Fic: Five times... 2. November 2004 - Even God's Simplest Creatures...

Dec 12, 2006 11:45

Title: Five Times Dean Was Saved. And One Time He Wasn't. Part 2
Author: felisblanco
Fandom: SPN
Characters/Pairing: Dean, John,
Word Count: 1267

( 2. November 2004 - Even God's Simplest Creatures... )

character: dean winchester, fic 2006, tv: supernatural, spn fic, gen, five times dean was saved, fic

Comments 21

denied_heaven December 13 2006, 19:53:34 UTC

*hiccups and wipes eyes*
oh the poor baabbbyyyyyy
that line bout sam callin dad if he..
*sniffles hard and clings*

felisblanco December 15 2006, 19:00:16 UTC

*hands you tissue*

I just got this idea for detached despair, like he doesn't even realise what is happening, just goes through the motions like it's not really him, just someone he's watching. So all thoughts of Sam and dad are only fleeting, pushed away before they can affect him. And then the cat breaks through his barrier, by just being there or by its own calm and soothing behaviour, I don't know. Maybe by cleaning itself it in a way cleaned him. Or maybe I'm philosophising a bit too much about my writing again. lol

mygothangel December 13 2006, 20:08:15 UTC

now this one was really scary plus made me totally curious

felisblanco December 15 2006, 18:17:56 UTC

Curious about the show or something else?

Good that it was scary. I wanted to give it a kind of detached feeling, like he was watching himself from the outside, not quite in control of what he was doing. I hope it worked.

mygothangel December 15 2006, 18:24:59 UTC

curious about the show
what did he do? what was up with the father?
why the gun?

the cat was a very nice touch, too

felisblanco December 15 2006, 19:21:30 UTC

Well, he didn't really do anything. Just life became a bit overwhelming. I don't know how much you know about Supernatural but here goes ( ... )

nimenic December 13 2006, 23:42:42 UTC

Oh baby! *sniffs*
Yay for the life saving cat.
A great description of it's behavior. Says one cat owner to another. :)

felisblanco December 15 2006, 18:22:07 UTC

Thank you, darling.

Kitties are the best. Don't remember ever writing any explicit cat scenes before, which I should do more of because they're such a delight. *pets own kitties*

winchestergirl December 14 2006, 10:20:09 UTC

OMG ...are you trying to break me sweetie ? ..poor Dean so broken ....and wondering if his death would reunite Dad and Sammy ....NO you silly boy NO ...Sammy would blame Dad more ..drive him further away not closer !!! Thank the goddess he didnt let the despiar take him over and found the beauty that can be found in life through the most ordinary things ...like the cat ...

felisblanco December 15 2006, 19:38:30 UTC

Yes. Did it work? *is evil ( ... )

a_phoenixdragon December 17 2006, 09:22:59 UTC

This...this right here, is why I'm saving this series to my memories... I've thought about playing with this idea, but DAMN... No way I'm going to now - this...was perfection... OMG yes...

*Weeps*

*Crawls to next part*

*Stops only to adore you*

*Hugs*

felisblanco December 26 2006, 01:15:47 UTC

Thank you! Thank you so much.

And please, please play with the idea. It would be so interesting to read your take on it.

I just got this image of Dean in my head, sitting in his car with the gun in his mouth and not really knowing why or feeling anything about it. Just contemplating if and why not and what it might accomplish. Not cold, just... detached. Even when he gets inside and realises he's sweating and trembling he still doesn't feel it. Like he's not a participant of his own life or his own mind. I think this is one of my favourite pieces I've ever written just because of this.

*hugs back*