FIC: Slave To Design. (1/1?)

[felinemuse]

Title: Slave To Design. (1/1?)
Fandom: Real People / 30 Seconds To Mars.
Pairing: Jared/Tomo.
Word Count: 970.
Rating: R.
Warnings: slash, implied and alluded to BDSM activities, a hint of fluff. Kind of. Are these two even capable of fluff?
Summary: Admiration made him follow in his footsteps the first time. The path twisted a bit, but something

Comments

[kit84]

I tried to quote lines that I liked especially. I failed and ended up quoting the whole fic here... *has taken it out now*

Copying (copykit?!) mlady_rebecca, I loved the imagery in...too many lines to mention. I loved the almost understated you tell us that Tomo had been with Jared (or maybe I'm sleep deprived and slow, because I had to re-read just to make 100% sure I'd read what I thought I did, lol) - but yes, understated, but it's just as powerful.

Fucked into unconsciousness like a whore, someone had put it once. He didn't care what they called it as long as they didn't stop.

^^ I'm so in love with that line.

Neither of them spoke, they just stared. But when a thumb brushed across his lips he parted them and when lips pressed to his own he let himself lean up into the kiss.

And this bit ^^ was fucking vivid in my head. Alongside the mentions of...at least the darker side of sex - Jared was positively claiming Tomo to my mind. Not many writer's can bring that clear a mental picture, with so few words, for me. I'm guessing that was the hint of fluff you mentioned? It's kind of...fluff with an edge :p *likes this kind of fluff*

I too am intrigued by sub!Tomo. I tend to approach it with some trepidation - I've read far too many BDSM/D/s/S&M fic's that aren't to my tastes (far too structured by the roles without taking into consideration the character) - but I've complete faith in you and your writing that I'll enjoy it. ♥

Thanks for an awesome read :-*