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Fic: Embracing Destiny (2/?)

Jan 08, 2012 17:53

Title: Embracing Destiny (2/?)
Author: Babette babettew54
Category: Superman Movie-verse
Characters: Lois/Clark/Kal-El, Conner, Jason, Martha, Lex
Rating: PG
Summary: Lois and Clark must fight harder than they’ve ever fought before to keep their family together.
Word Count: 3,100
Disclaimer:DC Comics/Warner Brothers owns these characters. No profit is ( Read more... )

fic: embracing destiny

Comments 2

repmetsyrrah January 10 2012, 02:26:23 UTC

Oh, yay!

I like how you introduced us to the Kent's lives though I do admit the time jump surprised me a little but you caught us up pretty quickly.

I like the depth you've given the kids, about how they feel about being part of a special family and how Lois and Clark try and handle that. Clark's talk with Conner reminded me of the one in the comics that he has with his adopted son Chris. He's right, love shouldn't have limits.

The end though, the end!!! *flail* Can't wait to read more, esp. after that!

babettew54 January 10 2012, 09:51:22 UTC

Hi, sweetie. Yes, this chapter was kind of all over the place. I didn't feel right about immediately jumping into the future, so I tried to establish the younger characters as much as possible.

I don't normally jump from past to future, and I hope it didn't confuse you too much.

Oh, really?? That line about love having no boundaries or limits is very true, of course. Clark is full of love and he just has to share it. *hugs him*

Yes, with nothing else to do, Lex is plotting the demise of his greatest enemy. How will Clark defeat him this time??

Thanks hon!! *hugs*