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Fic: The Things We Lost (12/?)

Nov 16, 2011 08:50

Title: The Things We Lost (12/?)
Author: Babette babettew54
Category: Smallville (AU)
Characters: Lois/Clark/Kal-El, Tess/Oliver, Lex
Rating: T
Summary: Lois and Clark must accept the cruel reality of their separation as they try to get back what they had lost.
Word Count: 2,600
Spoilers: Dominion (10.19)
Disclaimer: DC Comics, Warner Bros. Entertainment ( Read more... )

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paradisekendra November 16 2011, 22:08:31 UTC

Total romance! I love it! I said pretty much all my thoughts in my other review but everything in this was great. You write them all so well!

I love the line... Everything that was lost ... was found.

Beautiful! We need all that was lost BACK badly. So thank you for giving it to us.

babettew54 November 17 2011, 01:23:31 UTC

Awww, thanks hon!! You know how I love writing these 'four'! Only because they are amazing. I never tire of writing them.

Awww, yes they found it all again! Clois rawks.

Yes, we needed it BADLY!! Too bad the show left out a few things. I hope to clear it ALL up in the epilogue this weekend!:D:D

paradisekendra November 17 2011, 03:33:53 UTC

They're a good co-pairing, these four. They work well together. :)

The show did leave out a few things, wtf!

Thankfully, the fans are here to solve those things.

Did you see this vid?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7wWSsTC0jSg

babettew54 November 17 2011, 03:45:57 UTC

I agree, thank goodness we're here to fix all their mistakes and lapses of judgment! :D:D

Oh, I've never seen that one before. I recognize Tollie of course, and I've seen Hart of Dixie and Vampire Diaries. But those others, not familiar with those shows. I liked the video, excellent editing.

Oh, I also recognized Buffy because well, who doesn't!?:D

paradisekendra November 17 2011, 03:48:37 UTC

I love my Buffy! But yeah, I don't know HOD or TVD but obviously I knew Lexana, Tollie, and Spuffy so I was a happy woman.

I've written like...4 chapters to my Tollie/Lexana fic, which I'm still graphically re-editing, and I know the ending, but the middle is just being a brat. Still, it's not the most horrible fic. Trying to incorporate love scenes into it though is proving to be a challenge, lol.

babettew54 November 17 2011, 04:04:55 UTC

Oh yeah, Lex and Lana! I saw them too! *giggles*

Tell me about it. Love scenes are the worst, and if they weren't 'essential' to my stories, I'd leave them out, but then where would my stories be without that??!! *giggles*

But I'm sure it'll all come together for you! Just give it time, and then it will happen! :D

*hugs*

paradisekendra November 17 2011, 21:56:15 UTC

Haha, yeah I feel they're kinda "essential" too, and if I don't write them, I feel like something is horribly going wrong, haha. We need the RESOLVED sexual tension, no more unresolved sexual tension.

:)

babettew54 November 18 2011, 00:30:46 UTC

God yes! We're talking about mature men and women here! They need that release for god's sake! *LOL*

Who wrote Smallville?? Come on, they just didn't get it, did they? Like I said, all of their 'lovemaking' took place off-camera away from the fans who had to wait 'eons' for a kiss! *grrrrrr*

Resolve that tension, people!!! :D:D *LOL*

That's why I so loved L&C in the 90s. They knew how to kiss, how to get it started and how to finish it..! Damn, I miss them! :D

paradisekendra November 18 2011, 01:52:07 UTC

I love us knocking back and forth these Clois/Tollie icons. Haaaaa. I KNOW! Resolve the tension! I love shows that know how to show that. *sighs*

babettew54 November 18 2011, 03:39:30 UTC

*hehe* Me too! Clois/Tollie icons are the bomb!!

Anyhoo, I can understand these shows that drag it out forever for what we know is inevitable... I get it, but come on..! I know it's the 8:00 hour and all, but really Smallvilie, way to tease the fans and drive us up a wall!! And to top it off, we never really got that 'big one' did we? *SMH* *lol* :D:D

*argh*!! *giggles*

Off to bed! Night hon! :D

paradisekendra November 18 2011, 20:47:21 UTC

I know!!! And what the hell was the last season for except a major Clois/Tollie fest which we never got! Did you see Clois's kiss in the finale at the Planet? It was so unpassionate I was fuming. Compared to the Pandora kiss right before he puts the Legion ring on her, come on! *grrrrr*

babettew54 November 19 2011, 02:54:25 UTC

Yep, don't remind me! The 'finale' kiss should have been HOT!! But it fell flat.

My 'Crimson' icon was another time they kissed and 'meant' it!! Man, there were just too many letdowns of our ship in that department. Oh well, I really wish they would do another Lois and Clark series, but it's a pipe dream, I know.

I am dream, can't I??! :D

paradisekendra November 19 2011, 04:50:11 UTC

OMG---Crimson, best episode ever. I know, they were on fire. I mean personally, I love that he was so SURE he would be better than Oliver that he had no qualms about sleeping with her in Oliver's apartment---in fact, he set it up that way!

And being that at that point (and sometimes even now) I am WAY not on Oliver's fanbase and certainly not Lollie, I was thinking GO CLARK KENT ON REDK!!!

So I freaking love that episode.

Anyway, yes, no idea why Lois and Clark couldn't make out more often and more passionately in S10. It was at times like they weren't even a couple which is SO wrong because when they weren't a couple, THEY WERE LIKE A COUPLE!

Pardon me, I get irritated.

Anyway, made more progress on the video! *yay!*

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