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Fic: The Things We Lost (10/?)

Nov 03, 2011 10:15

Title: The Things We Lost (10/?)
Author: Babette babettew54
Category: Smallville (AU)
Characters: Lois/Clark/Kal-El, Tess, Oliver, Lex
Rating: T
Summary: Lois and Clark must accept the cruel reality of their separation as they try to get back what they had lost.
Word Count: 3,400
Spoilers: Dominion (10.19)
Disclaimer: DC Comics, Warner Bros. Entertainment ( Read more... )

fic: the things we lost

Comments 6

paradisekendra November 3 2011, 18:28:56 UTC

OH MY GOD! I'm gonna melt into a puddle of GLEE! Look at the way you wrote Tollie! I gotta cut/paste all the best lines and gush!!! You may get a phone call, sister, I love this! *grins*

He kissed her then, not sweetly, not tentatively, but with the force and determination of a man in love.

Thank you! Seriously, I love that. This whole section of them was sooooooooo poeticly written.

"Can you feel it, Mercy?" Oliver panned in her ear, heart pounding so hard he wondered if he would ever catch his breath.

*pants, can't breathe!* He called her Mercy, yay! My friend tweeted the producers and I think it was Al and he said Oliver'd call her Mercy before Season 10 was over---liar! It's so natural, she was on the only one who never called him "Ollie" and he was the only one who called her Mercy. I love it! And this was hot. :)

"Oh, you're right about that, but before we get that shut eye ..." She said and gave him a flirtatious look while she stroked his ear.

"My thoughts exactly," he whispered and then he kissed her.That ( ... )

babettew54 November 3 2011, 22:46:13 UTC

*giggles* I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter!!

"Mercy" sneaked in there, didn't she? *hehe*

I love writing Tollie geting 'cozy', opening up, talking about their past and 'maybe' their future together. It makes me very happy and I know it makes you happy too!

You know I love adding Superman mythos into my Smallville fics. I can't seem to help it, and it was overdue, especially after the finale.

I have a Tollie/Clois icon somewhere around here. I think I'll add it for the next chapter! *hehee* :D

paradisekendra November 4 2011, 20:20:06 UTC

I love that icon too! ^^^ Yeah, this was a great Tollie chapter.

And yeah, doing the mythos respectfully is possible, and you don't have to screw everything up to acquire it. *darn finale and 10th Season*

Yeah, maybe I'll try and make some Clois/Tollie icons for us soon!

Awaits more eagerly!

babettew54 November 4 2011, 21:39:54 UTC

OH, yayy!! Tollie/Clois icons!! *want, want* I been trying to do one but can't find the right photos, the right expressions. I'm sure you have some laying around! :D:D

Let's not talk about the 10th season, ok??!! *SMH at the writers and special effects people (if you can call them that)!* I could have done a better job with my HP computer! *lol*

Update in about a week! *hugs*

athena606 December 3 2011, 05:06:17 UTC

wow that Tollie love scene was smokin!

babettew54 December 3 2011, 12:53:00 UTC

Yep, that was the idea!! I love them!:D

Thanks for spamming me. It was so welcome after getting a flame the other day!

*hugs you*