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eternal_moonie August 7 2011, 12:37:19 UTC
ABSOLUTELY AWESOME story!!!!

She did it in the comics? Prolly early comics, right?

Thanks for sharing!!

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babettew54 August 7 2011, 13:16:44 UTC
Yep, I remember finding a long list of 'Superman' stories with summaries from the comics, and Lois gave him the red rock, unintentionally though, and certainly not to have sex with him.

Nothing is out of bounds with SV!Lois! I love her! :D:D

Thanks, hon!:D

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paradisekendra August 9 2011, 01:56:36 UTC
Gurrrrrrl, Jesus. There's good dirty and there's bad dirty, and this was the kind of dirty one could envision wanting! Or more! *grins*

There's so much bad BAD icky romance out there, this is the good stuff. And by bad I mean like porn, no connection, no stimulation, no sensuality, nothing to grab onto. This was powerful. Loved it, my friend.

I loved Lois's POV. I loved that she had a reason, a POV, motivation, a MEMORY, all the goods. And that Clark played a long. That's my man! *evil grin*

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babettew54 August 9 2011, 02:34:23 UTC
Awww, hon, thank you for that! Most of this story was written months ago, but it didn't flow quite like this. When I wrote this earlier, Clark was way too angry with her about it, and the sex was ... a bit rough, but I tamed it a bit and I think it flowed better.

I had a blast with the 'pretend' game! I could definitely see them doing that no question.

Lois was definitely motivated and Clark not even noticing the red teddy?! *bad Clark* But he made up for it! :D

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