poem in need of work

[feelingallalone]

here is a poem i am working on.....

When I am With you

When I am with you, you make me feel so strong
When I am with you my love will linger on
When I am with you, you make my heart skip a beat
When I am with you no other man can compete
When I am with you my frown turns up side down
When I am with you nothing else seems to be around
When I am with you, you are all I want and need
when I am with you, you make my soul complete