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J2 Fic: My Lovely Part 20/?

Sep 26, 2016 22:33

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j2 fic, my lovely

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Wow ruthless320 September 27 2016, 03:52:41 UTC

Jeez Louise, this is getting awfully intense! Can't wait for the next chapter! Amazing stuff. :)

RE: Wow fedaykin_here February 11 2017, 23:16:34 UTC

I'm so glad to hear the you are enjoying the story my dear! The good news is that I just posted the next part up!! Enjoy and don't forget to let me know what you think!

crucis01 September 27 2016, 05:00:51 UTC

Oh my freakin God! Just when I think you are slowing the roller coaster, you speed it up and make the inclines steeper! I wasn't expecting the ending of this segment, but it really added to the tension and suspense. I love how you are weaving elements from the show into the story along with the characters as well. FAN-FREAKIN-TASTIC!!!!

fedaykin_here February 12 2017, 00:36:04 UTC

you know I always like to weave stuff from the show into the story! I'm so glad that you caught that!! :-) as for the ending of the of the chapter, I saw it as clear as day in my brain! I was hoping to convey exactly what I saw...the tension, them running to the door in slow motion like you would see in tv. so I'm glad that I was able to capture the tension, hope, and the unknown. :-)

anonymous September 27 2016, 05:57:27 UTC

It was so worth waiting for , great story, finally we know Jensen is still alive , cant wait for more..

fedaykin_here February 12 2017, 00:36:36 UTC

Jensen is def alive. the question is... for how long!! I finally update so don't forget to let me know what you think!!

Thank you for another cliffhanger - not really frivread1 September 27 2016, 09:12:24 UTC

Well, I am beginning to think you might be evil :) Another great chapter, with a suspenseful ending and I have to start practicing being zen again as I wait for the next part. Thank you - I wonder, though, do other possible stories percolate through your mind when you are writing or does your focus just stay on one? These stories are so intense and I wondered if it felt that way to you? What do I do whilst waiting for the next chapter? Reread the old ones of course!

RE: Thank you for another cliffhanger - not really fedaykin_here February 12 2017, 22:25:24 UTC

In case you didn't know, I just updated the next part! :-) Enjoy and don't forget to let me know what you think!!

I'm so happy to hear that you found this part intense which means that it was exactly what I saw in my head. I actually saw this scene like it was in show motion on the screen. So I'm glad that I was successful in describing what I saw in my head! :-) I actually have thousands stories always running in my head. But I know that if I start all these stories at once, then I would never be able to complete them! Since I hate WIPs, I always aim to complete all my stories.

I'm so glad to hear that you are re-reading my stories...this means that I did a good job!! Yay!!! :-D

geri September 27 2016, 11:36:02 UTC

OH MY GOODNESS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO A CLIFFIEWHAT CHAD AND DJ AREW THEY GOING TO LIVE? AND IS JARED SUPPOSED TO BE THE ANTI CHRIST I GET FEELING THAT THEY ARE GOING TO PIT JARED AND JENSEN AGAINST EACH OTHER.

fedaykin_here February 12 2017, 22:27:42 UTC

I will tell you for sure that DJ is going to be okay! Chad really saved his life!! As for Chad.... well we will just have to wait and see! You mentioned something very interesting that has not been really address in the story...the Antichrist.... HMMMMMM. :-P And without, I won't say anything else!!