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featherxquill

Fic: She Smirks in Scarlet

Sep 25, 2006 00:02

Title: She Smirks In Scarlet
Pairing: Rita/Severus (with a tiny moment of implied Rita/Pansy)
Rating: Light R
Summary: He knows there’s only one way to master this creature in his grip. Give her what she wants
Notes: Written for snape_rarepairs pairing of the month, and the challenge 'power'. Also for the fanfic100 prompt 'She'.

( she’s not afraid of him at all and it makes him want to break her )

rita, fanfic100, het, snape

Comments 12

lupinotuum September 24 2006, 14:23:05 UTC

Ah, Rita/Snape, my OTP. -heartheart- Love it.

featherxquill September 25 2006, 12:05:54 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed :D

moogle62 September 24 2006, 14:40:05 UTC

...*blinks a lot* I really liked that. I liked that there wasn't any woah!sex!good! between the two but it felt like there was, and you could feel the atmosphere between them. You could see them, up against the wall (excuse me while I take a minute to go and faint) and your stories all have that, the same vivid imagery.

So, to sum up: very good. ;-)

featherxquill September 25 2006, 12:08:48 UTC

Whee! Glad you liked!

And haha, yes the idea of them up against a wall kind of... affected me too ;)

I'm glad you like the non-explicitness. I often get like that after writing something that's gone on for a few pages setting up an atmosphere between the characters. I'm not sure if it's that I can't be arsed writing the porn by then, or that I think it would ruin/overshadow the character interaction that built up to it. It's probably a bit of both, really ;). Anyway, I'm glad it worked for you! :D

velmaneuwirth September 24 2006, 15:46:29 UTC

Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooove.

featherxquill September 25 2006, 12:09:16 UTC

:D ♥

modernpirates September 25 2006, 08:36:32 UTC

Oooh power!love so hot I absolutely love power sex lol *hides*
Oh PHWOAR I love Snape/Rita so much! Great job, geeeez when do you ever write something crap? You are so talented, I love your writing like woah....maybe because it's about Rita lol but srsly great work :D

♥

featherxquill September 25 2006, 12:11:15 UTC

Hahaha why are you hiding? Power sex is awesome.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And omg you're always so sweet *blushes* I loff you muchly ♥

takeasadsong September 26 2006, 20:44:37 UTC

very nice. i LOVE this pairing. you don't need to be explicit when you can write like that.

x

featherxquill September 27 2006, 08:25:30 UTC

:D Thankyou so much! I'm glad you enjoyed!