Very belated birthday porn

Nov 16, 2007 07:28

This is really late, but I wrote mmmchelle birthday porn. :D

Happy belated birthday, Chelle! I hope things have slowed down a bit for you, but with the holidays fast approaching, I doubt it. Still, take a few minutes and enjoy. *g*

Many thanks to catspaw_sgjd for the lightning fast beta!

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fic, sga

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thegrrrl2002 November 16 2007, 17:56:21 UTC
Oh now, that is such lovely birthday porn!! I just love John teasing Rodney. And getting all turned on by it. They are so much fun, and they have so much fun with each other, and then it gets all hot and still sweet and romantic.

::frowns::

I think that made sense.

Oh, and this:

Yes, just like Star Trek.

made me giggle out loud. *g*

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feather_autant November 17 2007, 05:23:28 UTC
Yes! You made perfect sense! And it was exactly what I was going for. ::beams::

I giggled when I wrote the ST line. Can't you just hear Rodney saying that? *g*

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thegrrrl2002 November 17 2007, 05:32:48 UTC
I heard his voice perfectly! *g*

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advection November 16 2007, 19:01:18 UTC
"I'm . . . I don't know how to do this," John confessed gruffly -- Awww, that went right to my heart. Fun and hot and then so lovely too. Yay for Chelle's birthday and for you making this present for her.

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feather_autant November 17 2007, 05:26:17 UTC
That tugged at my heart too, because I think John really does want that connection with someone, but doesn't have the faintest idea how to get it. Good thing he's got Rodney. *nods*

I needed a kick start to write again, and Chelle's birthday did the trick. :)

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mmmchelle November 17 2007, 00:51:42 UTC
Performance masturbation, John lying in Rodney's arms, John choosing to be vulnerable with Rodney. You hit almost all of my favorite things.

Thank you!!!

It's a wonderful present.

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feather_autant November 17 2007, 05:28:10 UTC
You're very welcome! I did try to put a few of your favorite things in there. *g* I'm glad you enjoyed it! ::hugs you::

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perfica November 17 2007, 09:32:01 UTC
"I am security," John answered easily

This was one of my favourite lines in a whole bunch of favourites. Brava!

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feather_autant November 17 2007, 17:12:22 UTC
I liked that line too. *g* Can't you see John saying that? In his lazy drawl?

I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

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msbeata November 19 2007, 15:08:07 UTC
Now that was pretty.

Sam doesn't know how much of Rodney's love life she inspires. *g*

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feather_autant November 20 2007, 05:27:20 UTC
It's a very pretty picture, isn't it? *g*

It's so obvious John is jealous of Sam! I mean, he *pouted* when Rodney named that whale! How could I resist?

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