Because if he were to fall or even tremble slightly, he would not be able to stop himself from running to her and begging on his knees for her to make things wrong again.
She turns away to leave the room herself, disgusted that this is not the first time he has been in her house.
I really, really love these lines, because they say so much about these two characters. Will the masochist would absolutely start turning to Sue when things got too good for him, and Sue would absolutely be revolted by the way she's managed to let him in without realizing it. You've done a great job of getting across their dynamic.
Thank you; I'm really glad you thought so! I was so nervous about this fic because these are such complicated characters and their dynamic is really unique, and I really didn't want to screw them but I just HAD to write something on them.
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She turns away to leave the room herself, disgusted that this is not the first time he has been in her house.
I really, really love these lines, because they say so much about these two characters. Will the masochist would absolutely start turning to Sue when things got too good for him, and Sue would absolutely be revolted by the way she's managed to let him in without realizing it. You've done a great job of getting across their dynamic.
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PS: I love your picture! :)
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