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faythbrady

Fic: Shoes Firefly

Jul 22, 2006 14:13

I actually had this conversation with my friends newly adopted child. His name is Craig, but I'm thinking he should be a 'Damien'. Anyway I suddenly found myself trying to reason with a five year old on how he should be wearing his shoes in a beer garden in case he stepped on glass ( Read more... )

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jazzfic July 26 2006, 11:13:25 UTC

*snort*

Completely adorable. River lines to Jayne were wonderful and so her. Thanks for writing!

faythbrady July 29 2006, 15:56:26 UTC

Thanks for reading. Nice to find a friendly fandom.

gwenfrewi72 July 26 2006, 12:11:49 UTC

I agree. The cuteness factor of this story is so over the top it's ridiculous and I love it!

faythbrady July 29 2006, 16:01:45 UTC

Thank you.

gwenfrewi72 July 26 2006, 12:13:23 UTC

Also, think if River turned the big brown eyes on Mal and asked him if she could dissect Jayne, I think Mal's a big enough sucker to let her.

I like that, instead of being threatened with the airlock, he now threatens Jayne with letting River dissect him. *evil laugh*

faythbrady July 29 2006, 16:04:40 UTC

Ooh I'd love to write that
"Can I dissect Jayne, Captain, please?" River turned her doe-eyes on Mal, his heart flipping as they begged him for this treat.
"It's not--"
"Please?" She pouted and all was lost.
Mal turned to Jayne regretfully, watching as the blood drained out of his face at the realisation that the captain had caved.
"Sorry, Jayne. We all gotta suffer for Serenity."

gwenfrewi72 July 29 2006, 23:07:02 UTC

But I

"Jayne, I'm gonna throw you into the airlock if you do that again." Mal was staring pointedly at his mercenary.

"But Mal..." Jayne tried to say before being interrupted.

"Jayne, apparently the threat of the airlock doesn't impress you much. Maybe I should see if River still wants to perform an ape-topsy?"

Jayne face paled as he heard River's voice come down from the catwalk.

"Please Captain. Want to determine if the mammalian classification is correct and if he's a girl. Jayne is a girls name."

Seeing that Jayne was suitably intimidated, Mal smiled as he walked away.

gwenfrewi72 July 26 2006, 15:01:44 UTC

Okay I came back and read it for a 2nd time. It just gets funnier and funnier with every read.

My heart just melts with that last line. I could so see that little boy. Swaggering after his Daddy. *sigh*

doi2life July 26 2006, 15:35:17 UTC

Adorable >< I laughed hard when I read River's lovely line. Which is good, since I needed a nice little pick-me-up this morning. Wonderful job!

faythbrady July 29 2006, 15:57:37 UTC

Hope that it helped. I'm getting into this fluff thing. I usually just do angst. This is fun.